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January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy reading your stories, but witch and whitch are not the same word.
Ties when I hope you mean tears, chain was to be chin, and so on.
Please keep on writing. I love your stories.
Ties when I hope you mean tears, chain was to be chin, and so on.
Please keep on writing. I love your stories.
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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to be completely honest...this story sucks big time. There are so many grammer and spelling mistakes. When someone new talks you start a new sentence. Speech is normally done with "..." and thought it '...' also when you wrote things like "Inuyasha come hear" I think you meant "Inuyasha come here." There is a large difference in the spelling. Hear refers to sound. Here refers to place, spot, etc.
Not only that, but it was lacking serious story line. Yes the reason why they had to mate was there, but everything just seemed so rushed without any real detail. Kouga pops up outta no where and is gone again. Things like that. Not to mention Kagome falling for the guys so quickly. No reason why she changed her mind. All in all...makes for a bad story looking like a child wrote it. I thought it was adults on this site that actually knew how to write a decent story. Yes I know not everyone is perfect and some are maybe a little immature, but they have detail and explain and grammer. I am so tired of seeing stories like this.
Not only that, but it was lacking serious story line. Yes the reason why they had to mate was there, but everything just seemed so rushed without any real detail. Kouga pops up outta no where and is gone again. Things like that. Not to mention Kagome falling for the guys so quickly. No reason why she changed her mind. All in all...makes for a bad story looking like a child wrote it. I thought it was adults on this site that actually knew how to write a decent story. Yes I know not everyone is perfect and some are maybe a little immature, but they have detail and explain and grammer. I am so tired of seeing stories like this.
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow great story! Keep it up please continue!
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please write more. i am enjoying this story.
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting story... like it so far.. nice that inuaysha & kagome are full demons and kagome is pregnant with inuyasha's baby... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well then what happens next
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A Friendly Reminder
Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it wouldn't hurt to include that this story is indeed fiction.
Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you’re not making any money. You know a ’cover your butt’ thing.
Also if you have included one of these things it’s not enough. You have to have a full disclaimer. This is not only to protect us but to protect you!
Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it wouldn't hurt to include that this story is indeed fiction.
Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you’re not making any money. You know a ’cover your butt’ thing.
Also if you have included one of these things it’s not enough. You have to have a full disclaimer. This is not only to protect us but to protect you!