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for Bloody Contract

by bluedragonkai

person =#=Storm=#= aka PurinsuArashi
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just wondering if you have given up on this fic, I think its really good and a unique idea.
I hope you haven't gave up that would suck, its going so well too. . .

I really like how you showed the dead friend very vivid!
Gore is awesome in the right ways: too much can be over doing it and too little can be boring,
you got it just right! Poor Kaggome, I hope Sess can handle her freaking,
he is prolly not used to dealing with someone acting like that of which he wasn't the one causing it!
LOL! maybe Sess can help but it will tke alot of doing on his part that he won't wanna do, "why help a weak human female"
and all that. . .

Thanks for the greatness so far!

=#=Storm=#=
person Addy692002
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hoping this isn't one of those "get to the good part and go on hiatus" stories b/c I absolutely love it so far!

Good work - hope to see it updated :-)

schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woah
person kagomesirene
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice idea...kinda sounds like inspired by akuma na eros...keep up your good work
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A Friendly Reminder

Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it wouldn't hurt to include that this story is indeed fiction.

Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you’re not making any money. You know a ’cover your butt’ thing.

Also if you have included one of these things it’s not enough. You have to have a full disclaimer. This is not only to protect us but to protect you!
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is new! I cannot wait to read what will happen next.
good luck