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December 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Seems like a good intro but thus far all the chapters are just setup for what seems to be a further story
Hope to see it finished.
Hope to see it finished.
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story - please update!!!
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update really soon i have to know what will happen next.
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September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like where this story is heading. There
are allot of grammar and spelling errors
however, and that can mess with the flow.
Just go over it and correct some of the
wrong words and ect. then you shall have a
great piece of writing.
are allot of grammar and spelling errors
however, and that can mess with the flow.
Just go over it and correct some of the
wrong words and ect. then you shall have a
great piece of writing.
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story "they need you" could be better if you had a beta. I don't mean to be rude but your grammar is TERRIBLE! Some sentences are missing words and you switch from past tense to present tense all through the chapters.
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY, a new story! Though i'm still anticipating the sequel to In The Elevator! ^^, but anyway. I love this so far, try revising it a few times, just a couple spelling errors and puncutuation :) But those are just small things only I can point out -__-. UPDATESOON