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*Whine, Wiggle, wiggle, Grunt* More please!!!!!!

I'm dying to read the chapter of the ball, maybe there would be a hot demon guy who wants to sweep Kagome off her feet?. I love when sesshy is jealous and possessive. Great story!!!!! can't wait for the next chapter.

You have abandoned me haven't you? I work hard to get on the internet only to find... well, i find nothing. I feel so unloved!

Next chapter please!!!!! Very good am loving this so far.

my interweb is misbehaving so i may not be able to review as i would like so think of this as it "Keep up the good work!" good umbrella phrase yah?

That was one hell of a kiss!!!!. Can't wait for the ball.

I sorry I've not been here to review my internet inexplicably disappeared and I'm just now getting it back! (damn internet, making me need it and then leaving me) these chapters have been grate! I love the archery... the brief stint with poison was a bit extreme on Kagomes part but the poison could have impaired her judgment so I'll let it slide. I'm kind of surprised Sessy left the kids with the gang but I can see how he needed to stay with the Kags-miester. Anyway, keep up the good work and as always, MORE CHAPTERS! . .
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awe i bet the general's gunna fall head over heals for her. :\ always makin things hard on Kags.

Yaaay! You are my new best friend! This story is... well, it exceeds expectations. I don't usually have the ability to remember stories from one chapter to the next but even though your chapters are not looooong the come often enough that im not left in the cold. I also love your portrayal of Sessy. you have maintained his mysterious outer shell, where I have seen many an author break him down into a brooding mess, kudos! Your depiction of Rin however (in my humble opinion) has been a bit over the top, I have always seen her as the strong type. Bearing any burden while looking on the bright side. It just doesn't seem as if Sessy. would have let her hang around if she were that needy. But what do I know? I'm just a red-head. Anyway, this newest chapter was a delight! I'll never know how you fit such complexity into such a small amount of words (i could never do it).

Aaaaaagh! Kagome has the stats of a demon lord now? Does that mean Sessy. cant order her around anymore? Will he have to start treating her like an equal? OH DEAR! The implications are almost more than my little-girl heart can handle! I'm so excited!