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Oh, MAN! That is messed up! I definitely see where InuYasha's 'tude is coming from now! I can't say I blame him! So Kagome did a complete turnaround after the accident, huh? Wow - I can't wait to see how everything works out!

By the way, I meant "action" in a metaphorical sense, as in who actually ends up with the girl. No lemons is no problem! We don't need steamy sex to read, do we? haha - I hope not! That would make us all perverts! LOL I wish I could offer to be a beta for you, but I hardly have time to write my own dang story! I hope you find a good one! :)

Nah. Nobody would be too happy with either dying. Got a point there. LOL I am doing better. Be much happier once the brace is off in a bit. Yup, better start practicing. It could be fun though.

GAH!!! that is horrible! now you've made me wanna stab kagome!! which is bad!!!!
and no need for an alternate ending. I'm extending the story. so... be watching for it! oh, and i'm starting a new one, too! yay, me!

I think the chapter would've been fine being a little longer...but it was interesting to see Inuyasha's past. BTW, I really hate kids that like they're better than people...I get so scared since I've got a kid of my own now. Ah, but now I'm really curious as to what all happened in the past between Inu and Kag.

I am so up for a lemon between those two. That kind of raw emotion between them will eventually escalate (and not into a sweet, tender moment either! LOL).

I would love to be the beta for your stories. I think I would be a great help for you (not that you need much help. ;) ). I would love for you to contact me at any time on my email: supergirlmph@hotmail.com. Thanks and by the way, I love this story!

hey, i have a quick question: what's a beta? i've seen everyone on here talking about needing a beta and thanking their beta... so what the heck IS that? i figure i could ask you, since... well, you're the only other author on here that i really seem to get plenty of good, quality feedback from. heheh. anyways, yes, i WOULD like to hear your alternate ending for "The Affair." I think you have some good ideas, and I would enjoy hearing your perspective.
My reason for ending my story on a note like I am is because I believe that I should keep up the soap opera flavor that it's been running... even though up till the brain tumor, everything was completely true, haha! but, wait! the soap opera will continue!

Oh, man! InuYasha better pull his head out of his butt if he's expecting any action...which I guess he isn't, yet! Bankotsu is always a favorite - I love it when he's included! Yea - great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Thanks for the review earlier. I will get better at some point. LOL Just my dumb luck and grace. I got to trip over my hubby's big foot. LOL Thanks though. I will be starting on the chapter either in the next couple of weeks or tomorrow depending upon how I am doing. I may skip work for a day and give myself some time to heal as well as my son. Sun burnt boy. tee hee

P.S. Great update. I so cannot wait for the next one now. How are you going to get these two together. I can just hear Sango saying what my mom always does. She threatens to lock the two bickering people up in a room and keep the survivor.