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Yay! Go Sango, tell Inuyasha what for. Can't wait for the next chapter

This is great! A very good and suspenseful chappy! I loved it! Plz update soon!

I had to fix my disclaimer. Apparently I cannot get it just perfect enough to keep it legal. It is really getting down to the nitty gritty. I didn't specify that I didn't own the INU YASHA fandom and didn't make a single penny writing on this site... so yeah, it is hidden until they are pleased. I keep rewriting it and making the changes that she wants, but they still won't make it visible.

Oh well, I will get it eventually one way or another. I will even get an update written once I can get it visible again.

Great update. Awwww... I cannot wait for another chapter now. You are so getting me hooked on this.

Another great chapter! The interaction between Kagome and Shippo was adorable, and i must say that i like how you are pacing the relationship with Inuyasha. One thing that annoys me when reading some other authors work is when they hate eachother, then miraculously the next day they are lovers.. Though i am interested to see how you are going to move kagome's and inuyasha's realtionship along. I can't give any suggestions except to continue on and update soon! I was caught from the first chapter and i love it!!

hehe, good chappie. Liked Sango getting attitude at the end there. She is so much fun to write...definitely my fav character to write, at least!
But, hope that Inuyasha will see the light and that Kagome has changed. Or else I fear that he might push her do something bad again.

aww... *sad face* i'm sorry we're making you lonely... we don't mean to. but things are working out SO WELL! i'm very very happy with him right now! and he's not watching me right now; i had to close the studio for the past coupl'a days cause i haven't been feeling well. he's doing some computer work for some local business... he's been basically contracting himself out as a computer repairman, haha. but he's mine! and noah's in school. and i liked this chapter a lot, but i gotta say DON'T CHANGE ANYTHING AFTER EDITING! *laughs* sheesh, girl.
anyways, i hope you like my new one, it was a whim, and i think it's going to turn out pretty well. there'll be plenty of surprises, and i am still continuing with "The One-Night Stand" and "The Affair" but i'm having trouble moving on with both of them. "The Affair" is the worst with my writer's block, though, ugh.
anyway. great chapter, please update, yaddayadda. Pssh, girl, you know you're awesome!

I understand about needing to keep InuYasha in character; I'm struggling with that in my story as well right now. Hopefully he'll be able to come around to the soft side without losing his InuYasha-esque qualities that we all love so much! :) This was a great chapter; I love that Kagome threw that money back at him. lol "Take that!" hahaha

Don't worry about the beta. You have a great one, but I think I would just end up frustrating her (or him?). Between the time I THINK I'm ready to post and the time I actually post a new chapter, I revise and proofread everything a few times and still end up missing things. I would hate to have to make someone put up with my insanity! lol Thanks, though, and you do have a great one! :)

Great great chappy! I knt wait 2 read more! Hopefully inuyasha will warm up to kagome soon! Plz update soon!

I can accept the freak accident. It was really sweet to see Kagome and Shippo interact and of course Inuyasha had to come and be an ass. I loved the way Kagome and Sango responded to him...girls sticking together! Yeah, baby! Enjoyed this very much and can't wait to see what's going on with Miroku and Sango.

Wow! I never read this story before b/c the title and review didn't seem very good/interesting, but I'm really shocked! This is an awesome story and really creative, not at all what I thought it would be. Never judge a book by it's cover (or it's title? lol) Thanks for writing and sharing this!!!

-Cari