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i find it really interesting why did u choose sessy to be a girl in concealment? and i hope she let koga in lol i wanna see half inu-youkai and wolf demon pup!!!!!!!!! im excited for the battle scene and the next chapers

"In a rush he left for South Africa leaving his ‘friend’ Ryukotsusei in charge of his lands."

"A/N: this was three hundred years before Inuyasha mother and Inu Tashio met. So Tensaiga and Tessaiga didn’t exist then."

Africa didn't exist then either and telling us that Ryūkotsusei would betray him in the end was probably a bad idea. The words SPOILER ALERT might've been useful at the beginning of that sentence.

I almost didn't make it to the end of this chapter but I pressed on hoping it would get better but alas, I've been disappointed -__-.

Here I come back and there's a whole new chapter waiting for me! Brilliant! I did enjoy this one quite a bit. Poor Koga and his....ahem, issues.

I very much hope that you will post more soon. :)

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What happened to this story? I really really hope you've not grown sick of it. I was truly enjoying your writing.You're very talented, I wish that more people would review so you would know how true that is.....Anyway, I do hope that you decide to update soon......?


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*Sniff* I'm so *sniff* happy.lol. Just kidding. ^_^

I am very glad you updated though. And you said that it might be a few weeks, yet here I am checking the sitelike I always do, then low and behold...a new chapter! I was so excited, I stopped what I was doing so I could read it.

Very wonderful, I think you captured Sesshomaru's mother completely. Great job!

I only have one thing to ask: Please don't take so long to update this time.

(You can't see me right now, but I'm giving my computer puppy-eyes.) =p

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Hey. Me again. I'm sorry to bother you a second time, I was just wondering if you could update. I love this story, it's very unique in many ways and your doing such a great job. I just don't want to see such an interesting piece die.

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DanseiBoshi@yahoo.com

Well hi there!

You know, I've started to read quite a few of this type of story, but this is the only one that I ever read passed the second chapter. You're doing a wonderful job.

I do have one nite-pick though: I have noticed in a couple palaces, that you seem to go back and forth between past and present tense. Like in one spot you'll say "She saw him walking over to her." and then in another place it would be "She sees him as he walks toward her." Anyway, it's just something I noticed that might bring a reader out of the flow of the story for a second.

If this is a writing style that I simply haven't heard of, let me know, okay? ^_^

I hope you don't leave us hanging for tooooo long. You're a very talented writer and I eagerly wait for more!

See Ya!

Dear author ! A chapter is NEVER too long to read in fanfic stories !!! And I love your story a lot... Very good idea for a plot, and I like all the thoughts running trough their brains !
Just something annoying : in the last chapter, there are a lot of words wrongly chosen, or grammar problems, and it's difficult for me, a French, to understand the sentences sometime...

Thank you for your story !

A french mother and reader
Bonjour de la France !

Merely Truth

I love this story so far. It is cute. I kind of hoped it would be an Inu Sess pairing since you know, breeding pure Inu blood with a female Sess. Still, Kouga is a cutie and those blue eyes are a killer.