rate_review Reviews

i like the story. well written and entertaning please continue

where did Inuyasha go?

Oh I like it! I think it's very interesting, and I can't wait to see where you take this, thank you so much for sharing such a promissing story with us!

This is so good so far, I love Sesshy and Inu Taisho stories, and you don't see them all too often. I feel so bad for Sesshy that he can't be near his father during the ball, poor puppy.

I will happily await your update.

This story has some potential, I will admit. It seems like you have it already planned out and I would like to see what that is. Not many people like to tackle this pairing at all and I wish more would be brave enough to. But ah well.

BTW, I strongly suggest you get a beta. Your writing is good, but I have noticed several grammatical errors throughout each chapter. We're not all perfect, I know this, but please take my advice. OR, you could just use spell check, or something. Microsoft word is pretty decent, if you have it. I use it for when I write. But yes, please consider it!