schedule
October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like the story. well written and entertaning please continue
schedule
October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
where did Inuyasha go?
schedule
October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I like it! I think it's very interesting, and I can't wait to see where you take this, thank you so much for sharing such a promissing story with us!
schedule
September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so good so far, I love Sesshy and Inu Taisho stories, and you don't see them all too often. I feel so bad for Sesshy that he can't be near his father during the ball, poor puppy.
I will happily await your update.
I will happily await your update.
schedule
August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story has some potential, I will admit. It seems like you have it already planned out and I would like to see what that is. Not many people like to tackle this pairing at all and I wish more would be brave enough to. But ah well.
BTW, I strongly suggest you get a beta. Your writing is good, but I have noticed several grammatical errors throughout each chapter. We're not all perfect, I know this, but please take my advice. OR, you could just use spell check, or something. Microsoft word is pretty decent, if you have it. I use it for when I write. But yes, please consider it!
BTW, I strongly suggest you get a beta. Your writing is good, but I have noticed several grammatical errors throughout each chapter. We're not all perfect, I know this, but please take my advice. OR, you could just use spell check, or something. Microsoft word is pretty decent, if you have it. I use it for when I write. But yes, please consider it!