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Nice plot wrench! I feel a little broken for Kagome's plight. Stupid kitsune look alike. It doesn't help that Sesshoumaru's conversational skills are pretty close to nil, so explaining the situation could have been done with a lighter touch. I'm excited to see where this is going.

Thank you for sharing,
Nasaug

this is very good. can't wait for you to update. keep up the fabulous work

Celtic

Thanks for the update!! I love this story so far, the twists and turns make it so enjoyable. I can't wait for the next update.

This is a very unique story line (that is saying a lot!!). I hope you will continue with it. Thank-you for sharing your story.

i really do love your stories, i've stayed up just to read this, delirious as i am. i'm tired but it was worth it ^_^ always is! - r0o

oi another chapter...great...i have to say the chapter was really good...poor kags...always this cold & oppressive feeling she can`t identify but can assign to sesshoumaru and his family...and mr. icicle isn`t doing any better than in the last chapters...no wonder kags tried to sneak away...i`m more than curious about sesshoumarus big confession and kags reaction...it seems there`s no hope anymore that she gets ditched by sesshoumaru ans do there`s no chance to get rid of him without her family losing her honour... -_- ..poor kags...well at least she`ll give him some really tough fights..so no danger that she could lose her spirit ;) ...can`t wait till the next chapter (VERY SOON I HOPE)
mata ne

YEa! I thought I had found this awesomely awesome BRAND NEW story- which it is- and then, to my surprise, What do I find? Emmeran! writer of the Yellow Brick Road. Such a great story from such a great writer. It's a testament to your skills that you can create such different stories which are equally amazing in their own right.

Thanks for sharing!
Nasaug

The grammar errors were not really bad, btw. Just a few comma splices, run on sentences and other small things. (Yes, I do mean small.)

Anyway, it is a good story. I like it. I hope to see a new chapter soon. Take care.

love the story update soon

Not surprised Liam turned out to be a kitsune, I suspected after the mention of how she felt around his family. Now, is the twin brother Shippo? :-) Please don't leave us in suspense too long and update soon!