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for What Was Expected

by emmaren

schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
emotionally constipated ankle-biter.... best phrase ever! hope to read more soon.
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is Amazing so far! I cant wait for more!!!
person Merely Truth
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm ! Very good ideas very well written !!!! I love the beginning, not at all romanced, and the fact that eventually they will go from duty to love after such a chaotic meeting... I can't wait !!!!!!!!

Thank you very much

From a french mommy and reader,

Bonjour de la France
Merely Truth
person Elisa
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! So great! I LOVE this story! So romantic and relating to the two characters. This is a love story that I cant wait to read the next chapters. So great, please write more.
person sugar0o
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i have to say that this is amazing, and you almost had me in tears here, i could almost feel Kagome's palpable anger, and her frustration, as well as Sesshomaru's. Its all so new to her and yet here they are all trying to force her into this life, and she has never once had the choice to be anything she has ever wanted. this is such a passionate story, even in its beautiful demur coverlet. i cannot wait for the next chapter in this saga of a story, its so unique! ~r0o
person xcc
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update, I love this story!
It was great the way they both stood up for each other.
Thanks Emmaren.
Please update soon.
person InuAngel
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can never get tired of your writing. With every chapter I love this story more and more. I can't wait for the next update.
person river
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, can't wait to see what Sess-Mom has to say.
So, Liam may have sacrificed himself to protect the youkai secret, but then he lost his family's claim on a powerful priestess that is so important... it seems like he should have used his kitsune smarts to come up with some way to survive and explain how he escaped? (Then again, his twin doesn't seem so sharp, maybe they had to split an IQ.) Or maybe kitsune have better illusion skills so they don't need to rely on a priestess' powers. Guess I'll find out as the story progresses!

Thank-you for the chapter!
person sugar0o
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well you've managed yet again to make something so wonderful i feel awed having read it. you really do make me happy when you update ^_^ i cant wait to see more. as always mah dear, fantastic job. - r0o
person Elisa
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. The way you write is very emotional. Beautiful work. Please update soon.