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I really enjoyed this story, I do hope you continue it very soon. I very much enjoyed the way you captured Japanese customs so well in your writeings, even the small nuances such as the way a guest's shoes would be in anothers home, the speech patters, ect. I also liked the way you made their attraction grow over time, eah chapter uncovered just a little bit more...I hope you add more soon, I'm interested in how the Kitsune is going to through a wrench into these lover's mist.

this is one of the best modern AU i've read in a while. you kept the characters personalities wonderfully. I can't wait to read the rest of it!

I read Yellow Brick Road and I loved it so I thought I would check this one out too. You do NOT disappoint. I was enraptured the moment I started this one. I can't wait to see where it goes. The dynamic of the pack is just awesome and I love that there is a bit of angst happening. Hope to see more soon
Alpine

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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Finally, a big step into the right direction! I´m really glad for Sesshoumaru that she´s finally giving him a real chance to show her that he´s honest with her and his feelings.
I´m curious what Rin´s role will be in all this mess. She´s always the "good" one so I wouldn´t mind seeing her as the "bad" one once or if she will succeed at all. You can´t fool a dog demon no matter if they trust you in a way or not. Great chapter!

hey I was looking for this story I forgot the title since I read so many and the first chapter I opended and said oh this isn't the story I was looking for and then a few days later which is today I saw the title again and I opened it again and skimmed the first chapter and I was about to say this isn't the story I was looking for and then it hit that in fact she started out with a fox youki! So this was the story I love your story please keep up the good work update soon!!!

I loved how she went to the University of California, in San Diego. Is that where you went to school?

Mmmm, such a good well done work you produce ! Ah tormented love, how wonderful !
THANKS !

Bonne année et bonne santé !
Your french reader,

Merely Truth

Hey, emmaren
You asked if any grammar buffs would review your story, and I have! Please email me for an edited copy of the first chapter!
*note, I think the slow start could be remedied by starting the story with Kagome's catatonic state after she gets back home and talking about her trip to America, love, and loss as a cause to her current state.