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YOU CAN NOT LET KOUGA TAKE INU AND SHESS BETTER GET THERE IN TIME

First off, you're story was very well written, you have great talent. But, it has come to my attention that the arguement in the first chapter bears a lot of resemblance to mine in one of my stories- to porevent either of us from being accused of plagery, I am going to change a few sentances in mine, so they don't resemble quite so much. I ask you to please do the same.

I hope we’re not interrupting anything” oh lol sesho should so murder that person for interupting. nice 2 chapters hope you continue hopefully those two will finally get together and kagome will take those stupid beads off and beat it back to the well.

ok who the hell just walked in on them they should be punished

plz update soon

Ok, I love this, but the fantasy would be more fun if it came like later after they like got to get to know.........well......nevermind.......it is your story and it is good. I just like to leave them hanging just a bit longer I guess in tales like this one although mine are a bit warped. It always did depend on the story so just carry on.......forget what I said. Critics should be shot...........

Good so far. A few spelling errors but the overall story is very good- I look forwards to an update.

Seem really interesring ! Hope you will update soon ! ^^

well if this is your first all I can say is DAMN!!!! and can I have some more PLEASE????

Haha! Oh, I'm gonna love to see how this plays out for Sesshomaru. Maybe Inu won't even notice... (if Sessh is lucky, that is). Ee, but who wouldn't, what with a daiyoukai drenched in the scent of his own emission? Mmm, I can smell the smut already.

Great job!


-DM

This is your fist fic, it's really good. I like it a lot, I hate Kagome and I'm glad you portrayed her as the childish, abusive bitch that she is. Poor Inu, she's so mean to him.

The fantasy lemon was great, I LOVE begging InuYasha! Oh yes, finger filled, begging, writhing, panting, moaning, wanton little InuYasha's are very tasty indeed. This was the very best line “Oh Kami please Sessh, I want you in me so bad! I’m yours, your whore, your slave, your needy little bitch just please fuck me!” I loved when he called himself "your needy little bitch", oh, that was a good one, SO, SO HOT, the best line in the whole thing.I wish i had come up with that. As I said I love begging InuYasha, begging InuYasha is so incredibly hot! I love it so much sometimes I start thinking I'm overdoing it in my own writing, because I just love to torture him like that. Hmmm, am I maybe a little overly pervy tonight, I guess so. I've been writing and editing a lemon all day, with a begging InuYasha, I'm probably stuck in perv mode right now...then again, when am I not? i guess it's super perv mode.

I love this pairing, I'm glad so you decided to write a Sessh/Inu fic for your first, your very good. Sessh/Inu is all I read or write about lately, I just can't get enough of those two sexy dog demons, and all the delicious things they do to eachother. OMG, you do not know what I was just about to start writing, you were about to have a mini lemon in your reviews. I guess I am a total perv tonight...bad Izzi!

If you haven't noticed I have a tendency to go off and write long ass reviews, I write long ass reviewer acknowledgements too, I guess I just can't shut up. I hope you don't mind, I personally love long reviews, so I hope you will like my long review.

I love how you began the story with everyone already knowing that InuYasha is into guys, and likes Sesshy. I never thought to start a story like that. It's really cool to read other peoples fics and see all the different ideas that you never came up with yourself. The cool thing about an InuYasha that already knows he likes Sessh, is that you don't have to go through his possible issues with thinking of himself as gay, or having a problem with being romantically involved with his brother. then you can get to the yummy stuff faster. I like how Sesshy is a perv, fantasizing about Inu, I wonder what will happen when they look at eachother after Inu gets up, if Sesshy will blush, if Inu will scent Sesshy's essence and if he does will he somehow know he was thinking about him when he released it, maybe they will just tear eachother clothes off, or maybe they'll have one of those big 'hide your true feelings fights'. I can't wait to see.

I wish your chapter had been a little longer, but it's not because it was too short, it's just because I liked it so much. And AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH, that cliff hanger, I can't wait to read another chapter.

Great first chapter for your first fic, really can't wait for the second.

Izzi