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for Shower of Love

by VivianTrepe

person Anon
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes the chapter is short, but its really good! Who knew Sesshomaru had it in him, (besides we, the fangirls)

Cant wait for more! Please update soon!
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* I love Kagome's angry question of "Why are we back to the wench thing" It just fits so perfect! I can just imagine the look on her face!

Anyway lovely chapter! I cant wait for more!
person Inulovely383
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say by far this is turning out to be an extraordinary story. Your characterizations and plot of wonderful and they way you leave your readers in suspense is wonderful. I find myself looking forward to your updates. I can not wait to read your next updates. I really enjoy the way you have begun the budding romance between Sess/Kag. You are revealing it at an appropriate pace and the introduction of Kikyo...it leaves me wondering...will she be friend or foe. I would like to see her train Kagome in her Miko powers, while Sesshoumaru trains her to fight, all the while Sess/Kag fall in love. Anyway, you have a beautiful story in the making and I eagerly await your next update. Great Job...keep it up.
person Inulovely383
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This update was wonderful...it was enough emotion both sad and caring from Kikyo, Rin and Sesshoumaru. Your description of how Kagome handled the death of Inuyasha was perfect. I believe she would have reacted that way if circumstances were different in the manga. I can't wait until you continue, I'm looking forward to see how Sango, Miroku & Shippou will react when they find out Kagome is alive. Will Sesshoumaru go and retrieve them from the village or will he take her to them? I hope he would bring them to her because that would be opening her up to Naraku and she's not ready. Anyway, LOVED the new chapter, please update soon, great job.
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NO not an evil cliff hanger! I cant wait for more! please update soon!
person xcc
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! I'm curious about what does he want to say. And her friends, are they really dead?
Please update soon.
person Inulovely383
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter. The build of the story is excellent and the characterization perfect as well. Your story makes me want to read more. I anxiously look forward to your next update. Great Job! Oh...and the giddy girl in me LOVED the tender moment between Sess/Kags (YAY!!!)
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
VERY GOOD!! i cant wait for more!!
person Inulovely383
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very good beginning...very descriptive and you left your reader wanting more. I can not wait to see what you have in store for this story. Please update soon. Nice Job!