rate_review Reviews

Some spelling mistakes, but otherwise nicely writeen. The contents...God it is so damn hot and yes, I must say that kinkyness warning was quite appropriate,(using his tail in her ass?...) I wonder what Inuyasha and the others will say, and Rin of course, I mean she is practically Sesshoumaru`s kid. I`d also like to know what a inu/neko-hybrid will look like. Please update soon.

Wow over a 1000 hits!!! Thank you to all of my readers and reviewers :-)

I like that Kirara doesn't put up with Sesshoumaru being an arrogant ass. She has her wins too. Great story.

Amazing so far! I cant wait for more!!!!!

I hope you don't take this as a flame because it isn't. The story does have a good plot but is hard to read.

The reason..

The way you add in your own remarks in ( ).

While I understand you want to explain, all those does make it hard to read the story. The remarks are sometimes not called for because you explained it in a few sentences before. Try to remove those and I have faith that this story will come out great.

Good luck with your writing.

Panther

Thanks everyone for the Reviews :-)

Hello Panther, I normally used add ins because I just started writing fan fiction and I want to make sure everyone understands what I am trying to say. But since it seems to make the story more confusing to some readers, I will use them less. Other then the add ins do you like the story?

Pumpkinpi

Very good story, can't wait for next chapter.

I look forward to more of this story. It would be interesting to see Kirara as a humanoid demoness.