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for The New Girl

by SnuggleErika

person Suniko
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi.

Im a BIG Kouga fan! That's what caught my attention to your story. *fan self* WHOA! If only I could be a anime character. *pulls self together* Anyway...

I really like the ideal of your Eriko girl. I would love to read more. Please update soon! I'll be waiting.

Suniko
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! The ending of chapter 2 made me laugh because you spelled gentle wrong XD instead you put genital! LOL! But no worries, your story is great! I hope you update soon. Ja =^_^=
person sysclp
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Last line of chapter 2: "I finally gave up as the genital rhythm of InuYahas jumping put me to sleep."
Intentional or just a Freudian slip? :-)
person LadyPiro
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I really hope something bad happens to Kouga, and Eriko is just sooo cool.