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schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the alsome update! Cant wait for more!
person puppydog
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*whine* That`s it? Was good but please keep it up. I want to know how Sesshomaru will react to his hair cut!
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I couldnt contain my laughter at the last part the chapter! The mental image of Sesshomaru all of a sudden collapsing on Kagoma and her response was just too good!! Please continue this wonderful story!
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOW COULD YOU ?! How could you cut sesshomaru's perfect hair ?!?
Lol
Short but still sweet chapter.
I'm scared of what the elders will decide about Kagome, and seeshomaru too of course.
Is the relationship between the miko healer and the youkai of the southern army, Kiten, really totally 'real' or is he just using her...even if against his will ? (some of the signals he was giving off some chapters ago was off compared to his apparent comportement, like the sorrowful glance at the end when he seemed angry a sec earlier) Maybe the answer or some hints will be in the next chapter so I will wait patiently for your update.......or not.
Please please update again really soon! *look at the author with big tearful puppy eyes and bottom lip quavering*
person mysterious_blood
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg

loving the story i mean im deciding on letting you live even after you finish the story so you can write more. Great story
person mysterious_blood
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg

loving the story i mean im deciding on letting you live even after you finish the story so you can write more. Great story
person anonimity is suitable
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Definitely an enjoyable read, and if five reviews means an update, I'll leave 'em all myself! Hehe... =) Seriously, though, I enjoy the story thus far, the description is good without being over the top (although you'll almost never hear me complain of too much description), the balance of humor and seriousness is just right, and the spelling is good. LOL Good spelling always helps a story flow better. Well done; looking forward to more!

--Moi
person puppydog
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please keep going! It was sooo good!!! Lovin it! Keep going!!!
person Cinimmon
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Honey,I`m lovin this story so far so keepem comin and update soon! Tanks! Love ya!
person xcc
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with this story! I like so much how different it is!
Thanks, and please update soon.