rate_review Reviews

I normally don't like AUs so much, but you somehow made it work until now.
I love the humour in your story (I literally giggeled at your description of the tight-lipped, squirming Sesshomarou)and up to this point, everything makes sense.
Stay focused and please write on - it's a good beginning for a story and I hope, you'll keep up your standard.
Thanks for sharing!

Love,

Aysha

Well this is just enjoyable as hell. I always love Miroku anyway, and I am very much enjoying your first person portrayal of him, as well as the lovely fidget. I love him to bits and can't wait to seem more of him.

YAY Another chapter!!! keep up the Awesome job

you deserve all the praise that you get you are avery talented writer. please update soon. i'll be waiting

I love this story. Keep writing. It is both funny as hell and so far I like where you are going with it. Please add more chapters.

Wow, I absolutely love this! You're a WONDERFUL writer! Great job with wit, clever reparte, and dead-on characterization of types to keep the AU feeling like it's still Inuyasha, Sesshoumaru, and Miroku. Am so glad I read this and am sending Talon right over.

(Thank you, also, SO MUCH, for reading and reviewing Claiming Kin -- I wouldn't have likely found your fic if not for that. And your praise is massive hotness!)

Salome

P.S. Based on this story, you might like jenerik_brand's AU "Blue Moon": http://inu.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600093111 . It's a hardboiled detective take on AU and full of smex.

so far so good. can't wait for the update and the lemony goodness.

I Love this fic. I just want to know the pairing I'm hoping for a threesome pairing. I love miroku/sesshoumaru and adding inuyasha to the pairing is just hot update soon