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this chapter was really sweet and funny and i look 4ward 2 reading more.

i'm so glad that i found this story. the pace is so quick, yet nothing is left out. and the feeling is so slick and polished. almost like an old humphrey bogart movie. the length of the chapters fits perfectly with the pace of the story. keep letting your muse dictate the right place and time to end a chapter, because it's been perfect so far.

on the subject of being perfect, your characterizations are. it is such a pleasure to be able to recognize the characters by their behavior, even in a strange setting.

this story makes me laugh, and i would like to thank you for that. i would also like to thank you for investing the time and effort to come up with this very entertaining story.

oMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS JUST EVIL. HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE IT WAS TO THE BEST PART. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. LOVE THE CHAPTER JUST NOT THE EVIL CLIFFY.

Thank you, oh Talented Writer, for giving us this story. Its absolutely wonderful. It has kept me company in this sleepless night. Right now I feel incredibly amused. And curious as to what will happen next. Good luck and much fun with the writing.

S.

I like the dog whistle. It is much better than the beads. I still think though that the two brothers should be tied up and forced into time out. They are so bad........isn't it great?

Do you know what this story needs? MORE! XD Can't wait for the next chapter.

Neat! This is a fun, cute story. Thanks for sharing it! :)

wow i can honestly say that you had me hooked from the first paragraph. i love how you portraied fidgit as a drag queen it's perfict. i wonder how far his inter action with miroku will go. it makes me laugh to see sesshy so irritated by one mere neko. i look forward to seeing what pairing will develop as the story unfolds. i am eager to read a new chapter soon.
evilniiko

great chapter i really like the way Harrison Fidget interactes with sess. he really gets under his skin its to funny. can't wait for the next chapter. please update soon thankx and keep up the good work.

so he is starting to remember his dads love for the cat neko. that's sweet. i love the story so far and look 4ward to reading more. Bye4Now