rate_review Reviews

Glad you like it! Sorry, I don't mean to hold chapters "hostage", I only meant that reviews are often the spark of encouragement I need to start or finish a new chapter. :)

Normally, I don't review a story when the author holds chapters...hostage, so to speak. Unfortunately (or, perhaps, fortunately), after reading your first two chapters, I'm not sure there's any way I could not leave a review. I'm terribly interested to see where you are going to take this and just how long it will last, especially since these first two chapters have put the characters together very quickly. I was afraid this would be a Sess/Kag story, despite the pairing on your summary, because of the way Inuyasha is introduced (while not completely adverse to the pairing, I have to admit I am sort of a...traditionalist and like my Inu/Kags). But the situation you have set up as my curiosity piqued. Sess already thinking of dating/marrying Kags? Inu already trying to get into her pants? Very interested in seeing how this all plays out.

I won't beg or plead for an update, but if your story continues as brilliantly as it had started, then I will certainly keep reading and reviewing.

~cu-kid

Interesting start. I hope you continue the story and I look forward to reading more of your work. Ja ne!

goodness! you are a wonderful author!

when i saw the lack of line breaks i was reluctant to read it. please go back and add a few more spaces between your paragraphs so that it will be prettier and so much more easy to read. most readers see what looks like one long paragraph and instantly think that they will encounter all sorts of bad writing so when i read this piece i was pleasantly surprised at such eloquence.

i will be looking forward to reading more.

♣ thank you ♣
ginny

thanks :)

better spacing added. Hope it looks nicer now.