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October 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I can honestly say that i had no idea what to expect from this, but I was a very...stimulating read, lol. Well written, actually. And very exciting. I highly enjoyed it! Great work
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February 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
<3
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September 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story has quite a neat concept, and I did enjoy it... However, one thing bothered me. The last time he fucks her, he goes back to front. The penis that was in her rear... went into the other hole. Yuck. You never go back to front, that's just asking for some kind of infection.
Other than that, though, I thought it was very original and well written.
Other than that, though, I thought it was very original and well written.
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October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good. I enjoyed reading it. Good job.
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July 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was hot!!
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December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
as always so very hot
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! The concept of this was very interesting!! I have not read very many Naraku/Kag stories, only because it's hard to find any good ones, but this was quite enjoyable to read. I had thought it was a one-shot for some reason, but I was rather pleased to see that you are working on another part. I am really interested to see what will happen next! The writing was really good and the characterizations were very believable!! Nice work!
~Sianna
~Sianna
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. I like the armor idea among other things.
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAYUMMM. HURRY WITH CHAPTER 2!!!! .. ohmaaan. i love me some good, juicy nar/kag stories. damn ..
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea how this could get naughtier, but I'm all for it. That was way hot.