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for Death's Hand

by Jyrico

person wolfluv
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WELL YEAH!!! Who wouldn't want you not to finish this story? SO IF YOU WOULD BE SO KIND......


THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I definitely want more!!! very interesting story!!
person acr1228
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting start. But why is the whole fic in bold type? Also, it might be interesting for Sesshomaru to have to sneak around Inuyasha's mom before he reveals himself. btw, isn't her name a bit western?
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i want more.... how could you stop it there what happened are the gang wars over is sess comming to claim inu. and the dog collar thing on sess SO DAMN HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update soon and don't make it a one shot.
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW.At first I thought wasnt going to like this it sounded almost like fast and furious 3 backwards but then I opened and readit and totally loved it! Like your writing how inuchan is dressed (love his hair!!)and cant wait to f/o what sesh has on other than his collar now that hes in reg form! PLLEEEAASEE CONTINUE!!!
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome! Please do add some more chapters...I'm sure they will be amazing too.
person cshadow
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far. hope you keep it going.