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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story so far. The only thing I see is some spelling/grammar errors. Definitely and the use of then instead of than. Then is used to say what happened next (Then the dog chased the cat up a tree.), than is used as instead of or as a comparison. (Bluer than the ocean. I like dogs more than cats. I hope that helps. Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter.
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaarrrrrrrrgggggggghhh update noooooooooowwwwwwww or Ill be forced to release my man eat cookies on you...SO THERE!!!
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter im guessing it is either Kikyo or Midoriko
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Probably Midoriko. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I know how ut is tofall on hard times and yes troubgle does usually come in threes. lol me my sister and her brother are a perfect example. lol. trouble finds us we don't go lloking for it. Ohhh. MIDORIKO!!!!!???????!!!!!! Maybe. I know how troubling life is hence why I'm always overly exuberant to put a smile on people's faces. lol Some people would liken me to a female Duo Maxwell of Gundam Wing. WOW!Hope thing get better for you and your own.
Ja matte ne
Sakura Maxwell-Minamino
Eternity
Ja matte ne
Sakura Maxwell-Minamino
Eternity
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So is that Kagome and Sango? I hope this story is more focused on Kagome. Update soon. Thanks.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story; its got so much potential! I just wanted to suggest putting the IY/YYH crossover tag in your summary. You would most definitely snag a huge portion of readers.
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Been reading several of your stories since you came here and have enjoyed them all. Can't wait to see your next chapters, especially if Kagome is the gift the fates have planned for Hiei as I love that paring!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am so happy for you that your son is doing better now and i will make sure to keep you and your family in my prayers.....
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this story. Keep the chapters coming.