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for Inseminated Love

by SFP

person jk
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey plz plz update this fic i m really waitin to read it :(
person jk
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey plz update soon im relly anxious to know wat happens nxt :D
person jk
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
plz plz update soon i really liked ur fanfic. i like kagome n kurama pairing but dont find any gd fanfics on them so plz update soon waitin with baitin beath. :D
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH /'i DO HOPE TO SEE MORE WHEN YOU CAN PLEASE.
person madmiko
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great! I loved Kurama's reactions to the questions and then to the information the officers gave. TOO funny! The last line was priceless. I really enjoyed it, and I would write more, but I'm quite a bit under the weather right now and on my way back to bed. If your muse loves water, he/she should be well-served and inspired a lot of the time. So many of our household chores involve water. ^_~
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how kurama dealt with the shock... going for the most inane thing that had absolutely nothing to do with the situation! I'm sure that the woman cop upon hearing that he was helping a woman cheat on her husband will give her quite the complex... on one hand she probably at one point wanted to cheat on her husband for doing it to her and on the other he helped someone cheat (the bastard) More please!!
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL Such a shocking thing to happen. "nether" should be "neither" Great chapter. I love this particular story.
person Carna
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay Update again soon
person Kim
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read what happens next.
person Kassarau
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice....
Love the chapter, by the way (especially the last bit of it). Thanks for all your efforts in creating a great, enjoyable story. It takes a different approach in starting a romance story with a pregnancy beginning the relationship than most other stories, be it Inuyasha crossovers or fanfictions. I can count on my hands the number of times that I have come across with that story line. Usually it's it has nothing to do with unknown insemination but a broken up relationship or one night stand and he finds out years later, or when it is an unknown insemination, the meeting happens years later because the mother or child wants to know who's the father/dad and/or the dad sees the child and for some reason or another he want to know his child for what ever reason he has (usually because the child become his heir if he's rich, noble, or a CEO). Anyways, please keep up with the creativity, unique story line. Good luck with your muse and getting to the beach; and hopefully, you'll complete another chapter (or more if you're really inspired) soon.

Kassarau