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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story! Im sorry to hear about your hubby but i hope all goes well with recovery. Keep the spirits up and dont let things drag u down even if you dont get another chapter up any time soon. Kya77
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool story. now i have a new book series to find and read lol ^_^
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December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I must say, I LOVE this fic! Please keep writing it! I have never read or had heard of Dark-Hunter until I stumbled upon your fanfic...but I am totally hooked already! I love Inuyasha and Kagome is my favorite character and I just love reading any kind of fic that has her in it. Please DO keep writing! I can't wait to see how your story plays out!
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December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh oh oh. XD It would be so wonderful if some of the daimon-things attacked in the house. XD Wonderful chapter, got me thinking.
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like this chapter. i also like it that you update here on this site too. cause then i can write some more about this story that i am hooked on. you have me curious about her meeting amanda and kyrian. although i do know why kagome looked at marissa with a longing in her eyes. she misses shippo. i also liked it that her smile put ash a litle bit on edge, but in a good way. poor guy isn't going to know what hit him. update when you have a moment spare. i will be looking for a new chapter. happy holidays.
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love reading anything you write. Thank you for updating more often lately even when you are having some problems at home. I hope your hubby gets well soon...especially this close to the Holidays!
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i liked it. can't wait for the next one. i hope your husband gets better soon. Happy Holidays.
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So sorry to hear about your husband; hopefully his recovery will be smooth. You're in my thoughts. If you're using writing as a catharsis, it shows. These past two updates have been thrilling, witty and full of tender emotion and sexy romance. I adore this fic and the way you've crossed both universes seamlessly. The characterizations are perfect.
Kagome's past, especially with Shippo, is profoundly sad. I like the slow build-up you've established, how she's having to face it more and more since coming to New Orleans. Who better to help her heal than Ash? As tragic as it is, I can't wait to see how he reacts when she fully opens up. Not to mention how that coincides with the revealed secrets of the Shikon. She's looking sparkly, eh? That's a nice visual catalyst for some much-needed conversation.
I love reading about New Orleans. The Garden District truly is the most beautiful place in the city, although I'm guessing it's Kagome's stamina from the feudal era that keeps her from realizing how far a walk it is from the French Quarter. That's a good two hours!! I walked it during last Mardi Gras and my feet were *killing* me!! But anyway, you can talk about St. Charles all you want. ^_^ I hope to see more of this area in the future; it's a very romantic, soothing setting. A good place to cry on a good man's shoulder.
Kagome's past, especially with Shippo, is profoundly sad. I like the slow build-up you've established, how she's having to face it more and more since coming to New Orleans. Who better to help her heal than Ash? As tragic as it is, I can't wait to see how he reacts when she fully opens up. Not to mention how that coincides with the revealed secrets of the Shikon. She's looking sparkly, eh? That's a nice visual catalyst for some much-needed conversation.
I love reading about New Orleans. The Garden District truly is the most beautiful place in the city, although I'm guessing it's Kagome's stamina from the feudal era that keeps her from realizing how far a walk it is from the French Quarter. That's a good two hours!! I walked it during last Mardi Gras and my feet were *killing* me!! But anyway, you can talk about St. Charles all you want. ^_^ I hope to see more of this area in the future; it's a very romantic, soothing setting. A good place to cry on a good man's shoulder.
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey kiddo. i am glad you updated on this site too. i realized i forgot to write something on my other review. i thnk kagome really surprised ash when she guessed his age and she things about his aura. i also this it was adorable that kagome just took his hand with no problem and led him to her room. i think ash doesn't exactly know what to do with kagome. especially since the daimons are after her. i do know that the daimons would love kagome and would problary feed some of them because of her large pure and powerful soul. since ash is attracted to her he is going to make inuyasha look like a puppy when it comes to kagome being. i don't know just my opinion. update soon. i looking forward to reading more.