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for Let The Night Begin

by Carmila

person Anon
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
there's somthing about this story that haunts me. i love the detached, yet steamy hot emotion that inuyasha feels. i think kagome was written as a true teenager, for once. whatever you've done so far, keep it up. i love this story!
person Sammy
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that's hot. Sucked me right in and I can't wait for the next chapter!
person Ivy
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far! Especially the way you've written Inuyasha...glad that he likes Kagome and is not pining for Kikyo. Also, its cool how you made Kagome kind of tomboyish and not really realizing her own beauty. I don't usually enjoy high school fics but your's is really great ^_^