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for How All Came to Be

by IndigoMiko

person snowbird
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered this story and I love it. It is so emotionally full of tragedy along with budding feelings between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. I'm glad you're taking it slow with them. Some people believe in love at first sight, but I don't. I think it takes time to build trust, friendship, and attraction before love comes. Also, he's not constantly having 'conversations' with his beast. I've never liked the 'conversations' in stories, even if the story is good. It's better and more natural when his beast gives him certain feelings and impressions as a form of communication. I want to believe that the beast is responsible for their auras bonding so tightly. I think his beast side recognized her as a potential mate and is slowly helping his humanoid side with his slowly budding feelings for her. To me it's a nice explanation, but you, of course, may have a different idea altogether. You are a very talented writer and I've liked everything you've wrote so far. Especially the way you write about and describe their emotions. You make the reader feel along with them. This story is definitely on my fav list.
person Noacat
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. LOVE IT!

Side note, I also happen to come from the hand shaped state. I live on the south-western part of the palm -- near the end of the "head-line" in palmistry. ^_^
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it, can't wait for the next chapter!!! ^_^
person sysclp
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! I look forward to each update and only wish they could come more frequently. :-) Keep up the good work!
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is an astonishing story, I have never read anything like it, there have been moments where I have laughed and moments where I have been angry and moments where I have actually cried. You are an amazing author and I cannot wait until the next chapter is updated. I love how you are not rushing the relationship of Sesshomaru and Kagome and I especially love how much thought you have put into this story. I hope to see another chapter soon, and once again I would like to tell you that you are a wonderful author.
Milana Despana
person swasdiva
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that chapter left me breathless. So many twists and turns, so many intriguing, suspicious mysteries...my head and heart are spinning. I love how you've built up the connection between Sesshoumaru and Kagome, as well as the insidious suspense around Inuyasha's transformation. And what's up with this Maki chick?? Effortless, epic storytelling as always, Indigo Miko! I'm besotted with this story!
person LovelyJaded
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was very powerful. I hope you update again soon.
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story...this is the first one that I have ever read that is like a story ^.^ Awesomeness. Please keep up the amazing job!
person LovelyJaded
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! This story is great. I'm addicted now. I can't wait until next update!
person caliha
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL