rate_review Reviews

i'd kinda like to see more, maybe you could do a strawberries and cream, maybe a watermelons or something, either way for a first lemon this was very good, i think though you may have forgotten to make them react to the cold that the ice cream creates before the heat of the tongue soothes it, other then that it was very well written. wonderful job. - r0o

I once licked a ice cream cone like that in front of boy once. you should have seen his face. he could not take his eyes off me. I then walked away leaving him just staring off into space ha ha . it was so funny to see.

loved the fic, made me want to get some ice cream now but chocolate ^_^