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for Encroaching Darkness

by Nile

schedule April 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!

person Trelweny
schedule November 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cute and interesting so far. I like how it was a matter of honor in making Kagome Lady of the West. Will she remain blind, I wonder? Seems to me the way she was cursed that there's a chance she won't be once she fully realizes how blind she was in love.

Thanks for writing!
person evilpinatag
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWWW, he called her his lady! He is such a gentleman...and the training was cool by the way. Update soon please!
person Anon
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this tonight so I'm only on chapter 1, I like it so far, poor Kagome though. Just as an FYI there's no space before the honorifics, so it should be Sango-chan instead of Sango- chan, etc.
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sooooo glad that you updated this amazing story!!! >o< keep up the good work!!
person Saholia1
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg your story had me hooked on the first sentence! I can't wait until you update! lol...very well written and Jaken sure got what he deserved! Now I can't wait to see what's in store for the--ehe--new Lady of the West! xD
schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The Lady of the West thing was surprising, but not unwelcome. The story is going good so far and I'm expecting more updates soon. I have to say, that this is a scenario that is rarely used and exploited and this is the second story that I've read like it. Keep up the good work!

~Draco
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you should update
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person snowbird
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I very much like the beginning of this story. Jaken is so stupidly shortsighted. He knows why she's there and that Sesshoumaru is going to be highly pissed when he gets back and learns how she's been treated. Jaken will be lucky to just get by with being punished. Is she going to have to stay blind for a long time? Please add some more. It's been over a month since the last update.