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Wow!I love it!

WOw, inu's 60.. ? personally... that's pretty hard to imagine ...him with kagome. but im not saying anything about your actual past. just the charcters in generall.... k, that didn't make sense? Well. it's not meant to be offensive okay? :). but i like how this is going, cant wait to see what happens next!

Ohyeah!, i've actually tried writing about my life/past but it's realllllly hard for me to get it onto paper. so kudos to you !

I have a much clearer perspective. And I'm sorry if I offended you in anyway. Just so you know, this was a great chapter, and I hope to see an update soon.

I LOVE IT!!
Update soon.Im hooked!
^Dei

That was pretty hilarious, I tought stuff like that only happened in movies but I guess not. Anyway, I really feel as though Kagome is coming off quite selfish. Because she's said nothing of Kouga, or that fact that she putting not only her own relationship in jeapordy, but Inuyasha's as well. Maybe it was love at first sight, but sometimes you have to stop thinking so lovey dovey and start thinking realistically. By the way another great chapter, and I hope to see you update soon.

This is awesome so far. Can't wait to read more! But next time .. try seperating them into paragraphs? so that it's easier to read. But all in all . great chapter! update soon!

Great plot, and a little interesting to see it coming from your personal experience. I really hope to see this story updated soon.