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for The Heart Within

by YoukaiFate

schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This really takes the cake. This story is great, there's just no other way to describe it. When Jin arrived on scene I thought 'O great now Sango will either get her ass kicked in her own (Kagura's) element, or she'll be taught something good'. If the training goes how I think it might it could be a little of both. Anyhow could you tell me the pairing I missed it if it was posted? Thanks and please update soon : )
person Starcrossed
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* Jin is such an amusing character! =^-^= I'm liking this story more and more!
person ysiao
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome follow up! As usual, I can't find fault with your work. Well done!
person Starcrossed
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, I am absolutely thrilled at how well you write the characters' personalities into the story!
person Legilmyth
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an excelent chapter. I loved the detail of Hiei going into Sango's mind. I can't wait to see what kind of training Kurama has in mind for her as well.
Keep up the great work.
person Rose
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! The humor is handled very well and the dialog and characters are perfect! Please continue.
person Vyper
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, I hope you have more. Sango is a cool character.
person Starcrossed
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I love this story! It's a really unquie way of looking at this set of pairing, and I can't get enough of it! Please continue writing!
person ysiao
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! Thanks for taking it up again..much thanks for this story!
person ysiao
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one of your very best stories yet! I love the angsty Sango/Anei and although I haven't watched much of Yu Yu Hakusho, you've made Kurama, Hiei and yes even Yusuke extremely lovable. Thank you for a well told story, hope you update soon!