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Wow, such a good story ! With Sango for once, and Yusuke's crew, I love the mix, the plot was very interesting with lot of confidence, hurt, fun and love, and some special characters !!!

Thank you ! I'm going to follow immediately in your new story... :D

A french reader,
Merely Truth

"Holy shit", indeed. You are a phenomenal writer! I have been reading fanfiction for 11 years, and NEVER have I read any writing so worthy of being published. I usually skip over action scenes, and yours, I could picture entirely, I was so involved. I'm only on chapter 5, and I am ECSTATIC that I have so many more to go! I canNOT wait to see where this heads. I wasn't even a fan of the pairing when I first started! If you haven't already considered it, if you aren't already published...please, please do think about it.

On to the next! :))
-rogue

Hot Damn, I wondered what had happened to you. I have had The Heart Within and Hate the Game on my favorites list for years, hoping someday you would come back and finish them. This chapter is definately "cummin" back with a vengence...LOL. Damn, I quit smoking in September 2010, and now I want a cigarette.

wow, talk about hot and over the top!
Man, once i started this story I couldn't look at anything
else! lol update soon k?
KUDOS!
~Silent P

LOl. GO SANGO! I would have cold cocked him too. Okay, absolutly awsome as usual. I can't wait to see how you take it from here.

I love this story!! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter and I hope that you will update soon. I love how true to character you have made both Hiei and Kurama and I am anxious to see how Sango will take everything now that Hiei has accepted his feelings and Kurama has merged with Youko. I am certain that it will not be a simple thing to regain her trust since they both hurt her badly.

Yup, I knew it! Awesome fight scenes! And now Kouga knows. I'd like to throttle both Kurama and Hiei myself now grrrrrr. Again your depiction of Sango is always above par. Keep up the good work!

Woot! I didn't think I'd ever be excited with a fight scene, but I am, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

wow, you're on an update roll. practically an update every day these past few chapters!

yes, I was rather disappointed Sango didn't give Jin a chance after all. He's so cute with his wiggling ears and his lighthearted banter to support her when she's down. but I suppose too many paramours would crowd up the story; I honestly wasn't ever expecting him to make a move in the first place. And it makes sense that she would associate his personality too closely with her first love. I love the frustration/confusion Kurama must have felt upon returning to the apartment and finding many rowdy male demons crashing there.

I loved the humor in this chapter and the camaraderie. Poor Jin but I sort of guessed you weren't heading that way. I now can't wait to see what you have next for Sango. A fight? A confrontation? suspense!