rate_review Reviews

Nice story, I felt like the first couple of chapters moved a little quickly but I really like it! hopefully you will post more soon, keep up the good work.

I stumbled across this story once more and must say
I enjoyed it. I'm sorry not more people have reviewed.
I know that can always set an author back, but I hope
you continue with Deadly Beauty. (I just wrote a long
review and AFF didn't post it. I mean, the site froze
on something.) I really hope Kikyo gets stabbed to death
with an ice pick a million times. She is quite the little
two-faced, fake bitch. -sigh- Please post a new chapter soon!

It's a rele good story so far :) i hope inuyasha and kagome can reveal their relationship soon, they are such a cute couple. I rele liked that you made inuyasha work for kagome's forgiveness and not just having her melt when he said he loved her. I noticed that in earlier chapters that you were worried that kagome and inuyasha's relationship was moving to fast, but i think it's a perfect pace as if it was too long the story would drag abit.. maybe. Anyways, sorry if i dragged on abit myself, but i don't usually review and i thought your work deserved more than just a 'good job' so yea.. well done :). I hope a new chapter comes soon. xXx
p.s. your other story 'Fallen Angel' is also brillant and is how i found 'Deadly Beauty' so congrats to both :)

I like this story. I cant wait to see how this situation is resolved. smiles

one wonders st the time frame from when the higurashi's got the bank demand to when they got the "oops! our mistake" letter? if the two put their heads together they may smell a conspiracy.

good story, interesting and entertaining.

thank you,
ginny

I really like your story so far. I really
haven't checked this archive but I'm glad I
came across "Deadly Beauty". I hope to see
another chapter soon! I like how you haven't
really built Kagome up to be marvelous Miss
Popular too. It's to see a normal Kagome with
a talent. Well, I know you haven't got any
reviews yet SO let me be the starting off point!

I REALLY liked this story I hope you do continue on with it, it would be a shame not to! Kagome is still the same but now she can kick ass I think thats wonderful!
Please do continue on with this story! Because I would just love to read more and see it come to an end!