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for After Midnight

by IndigoMiko

schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Two chapters, you really make me a very happy reader!! The mystery deepens, the plot thickens and the pairing gets along quite a bit. What could I want more? Oh yes, I still feel there are still an issue or two between Inuyasha and Kagome, that they should work out, fot the sake of the both of them, cause at the moment they both are suffering becuae of it. Otherwise more, mor and even more chapters of this wonderfull are craved on my end so pliease supply those for my hungry mind, and I will be eternally grateful.
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
seeing your dedication I was very touched and reading your battle scene doubly so. of course the better the story the faster one reads it and this chapter was was something I practically gorged myself one, that´s how excellent this chapter was. I am looking forward in seeing the faces of the remaing youkai when their leader is turned into a pile of dust before their eyes. Though there is still a certain mystery in your story regarding the strands of hair that had been pulled from Sesshoumaru, and the plan behind that, so keep up this excellent work and update fast 8 though not so fast that you do not give us a decent chapter, remember if it takes a bit longer , but your chapter is better and maybe even a bit longer, then it was worth the wait)
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well if Kagome is exhausted it`s your fault as the author of this story.Seriously,this story is nearing it`s first of hopefully many climaxes and I hope it turns out to be epic!! From the preview I can see that inuyasha get`s knocked out,though please don`t make him weak,I mean he is incredibly strong. 8Does he still wield Testsuaiga? If so then he kicks ass with kaze no Kizu, bakuryuuha, barrier breaking,Kongosouha, dragon-scaled and the Meidou zangetsuha,wow!!) I cannot await Sesshoumaru`s arrival.I picture him coming down in anger wielding his Bakusaigen and tearing through the enemy, neat huh? This battle needs to be written down soon. I also wonder whether Shippou will end up with one of Rin`s daughters? Oh and please let somebod tell Sesshopumaru Inuyasha called him "Fluffy" I`d like to see his face.
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schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao "fluffy's gunna be pissed" hahaha, i love this story!
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Since when does Inuyasha call Sesshoumaru "fluffy"? (preview) Other than that , what an incredible chapter that was! I had a lump in my throat reading about Rin`s dead son, though I involuntarily had to smile too, for he obviously fought an died well, and what more can one hope for in life? the story is now taking up spees and yay! in the neyt chapter we see the rest of the gang!! Please update as soon as possible!!
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is very good so far! Please keep going!!

Though I am curious, 50 years has passed, has Kagome aged as a normal human would or more slowly. If she aged normally that would put her in her 60's, she seems too active to be in her 60's.
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOH I like it. Write more!!
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I do not understand your story in all of it`s possible glory, but it is really starting to heat up, please, update doon, for the action and the cliffhanger have made me trembling to read the next chapter, though unfotuneatly it is not yet up yet, so please update!!