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*pokes you* update :D

i loved this! i hafta say i think Kags will be more like, what the heck happened? and then dont do that again, bad puppy -bops on nose-

I also like that he admitted to himself that She was his packs alpha female and a friend. i love that he's running on instinct here. I cant lie some little part of me, said 0o0o0o0o0o he's gunna get her and hump her legs... that would be the part of me that lives in the gutter, but i was surprised, this story is so captivating, and i do so adore it, and cannot wait for the next update! - r0o

YAY!! Another great chapter!!!

I loved how you are writing this story! The characters are so alive... can't wait for the next update! ^_^ Keep up the great work!

Stop making me feel special or I might get a big head! Seriously a wonderful story and excellent chapter that shows clearly how powerful Sesshoumaru really is. I mean in the battle of Edo Kagome nearly fried Naboru,. he making his escape just in time,but kagome goes all out against Sesshoumaru and he is still able to nearly kill her, break down her barrier and walk away somewhat steadily. That guy is monstrously strong (which is of yourse also a testament to Inuyasha`s strength, seeing as he way able to survive the attacks on him by Sesshoumaru). O=n the other hand it is quite funny because also instinctively tried to protedt her, by trying to make sure who she is. Still both Rin and Shippou are still those who are the ones to sprout uncomfortable truths, that have to be ealt with. The overall way your story is going is great and the plot still holds many mysteries. I am quite looking for Myouga`s appearance. Tzhat flea is alway quite funny. I am also very interestd how Sesshoumaru`s forces will feel about being commanded by Inuyasha, though I suppose it is a safe bet that Miroku and Sango will also fight with him till then, cya. Hoe you update soon.

Another Alsome chapter! Cant wait for more!

Big fan of this story, can't wait for more!!! You're doing an awesome job!!! ^_^

Mmmm... well that certainly explains a lot the hate, I mean family arguements are always the most troublesome, though in this instance I do not think that Sesshoumaru is aware of his niece`s existence. He clerarly has no easy family. I am intrigued as to wzhat part Kouga has to play.Otherwise not muyh happenend, though it seems as to destroy Sesshoumaru his niece has no qualms about starting a full-out, full scale war which is really going to be interesting (Yay, another battle scene?!! I hope so, the last one was already extraordinary) Please udate soon.
P.S.: I am interested in how kouga and Inuyasha will be greeting each other, hehe.

11.damn another great chapter leaving me to want more. well done, i cant wait for the next! - r0o

again i'm kinda shocked that something like this was such detail and fantastic story line has so little reply back to you, i find your details are fantastic and leave little to be desired for it its rather amazingly well put together. its well written, well thought, and very imaginative. i read this and i'm left annoyed bc i dont have the next chapter yet, in other words you leave me wanting more, and that's a good thing ^_^ always look forward to seeing more. always - r0o

i dont review enough your story is rather amusing and i do so very much love it, i look forward to the next update, its a wonderful story. - r0o