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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is oh so good... it is so decadent! Please update soon, I can barely wait to see how you play out their first interaction in front of others, and later in private...
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
P;ease update soon!!! I really like how ur story is going so far! X3
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad start and I look forward to future chapters. Good job on the writing too, nothing is more annoying than having to wade thru bad spelling, bad grammar, and incorrect word usage, so I really appreciate it when I get to read something lacking those things. Thanks!
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I have to say that for your first fanfic it is quite enjoyable. I hope that you continue this fic I would like to see what happens. Hope to see a new chapter. Thanks for the srory.
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very interesting i really hope we don't have to wait long for the next update for this, wonderful job! - r0o
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, it is not obvious that this is your first story, it is very very good! It is obvious that you are a talented writer and I hope to read more of your story soon!!!