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for The Demon's Ball

by KPO4

schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story so far! Once I started reading I couldnt stop. Please keep going with this story, I cant wait to see what happens next!
person snowbird
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Shinji seems like such a dear. Good. I'm glad Sesshoumaru is on edge and hot for Kagome. He'll probably fight it while trying to find excuses to keep other males away from her. Her and Shinji's entrance was delightful. But the best was Inuyasha simply because of what was announced when he came through the doors. I had to absolutely cackle with laughter. I'm surprised Sesshoumaru didn't get choked on his drink. I can't wait for the next update when she comes face to face with Kayashima and he realizes who she is. So will the others when they see his expression and catch on to what it means. Oh boy, I wonder how Sesshoumaru will react. heehee.
person missy71
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Like the new chapter, can't wait till the ball actually begins and with that the festivities. I am anxious to see how everyone behaves.
person missy71
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice new chapter. I can't wait to see what happens at the Ball. Keep up the good work.
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg I love this story please please up date soon I would love to see how you work this out
person Anguloce
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm enjoying this concept, the demon ball is a great idea. can't wait to see how it turns out!
person snowbird
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked the first 2 chapters and the plot of the story. I like a strong Kagome. It makes her more equal to the power of Sesshoumaru. Too bad Sango is already paired with Miroku. I think she would go good with Kayashima. She's a warrior, too, and deserves to be paired with a youkai like Kagome. In the anime, I always thought her to be a much stronger character and fighter than Kagome. She was more my ideal of what a warrior priestess should be like. I think the monk's too tame for her. I get tired of them being paired. Maybe you could let Kayashima give Miroku some competition. It would be even better if the monk lost Sango. After all he is a hentai and could easily find solace in the arms of another female. Instead, you probably plan for Kayashima to give Sesshoumaru competition for Kagome. Such a waste of what sounds like a gorgeous dragon demon because we all know he will lose and end up empty armed.
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, please continue this story ASAP. I laughed, had cynical remarks flitting through my head and was breathlessly reading your story. It is absolutely great, I love it,You are excellent the way you write. Though there are a few things bugging me. Sesshoumaru knows Kagome well, he faught with them against Naraku, where are Jaken and Rin? (especially Rin) And how the hell did Kouga get to be a Taiyoukai? Le leads a tribe but he is nowhere as in the same league as a Sesshoumaru. Still... continue I am waiting impaitiently
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's what they do to me. LOL I am just along for the ride. I am getting into the story. Good job.
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I´m now very impatient to see where this is leading for you seem to have a fine sense of mischief embedded in your story and my anticipatory grin qas huge. The funny thing is Kagome has already practically seduced two taiyoukai,three if you count in Kouga, though he has Ayame. whoa and not even there for two days! pleas show mercy and relieve us of this huge tension your excellent story has created, update!!