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for The Demon's Ball

by KPO4

person snowbird
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw shucks. Why could he not have just given her the courting mark after the kiss. I was disappointed about all that took place between them and in front of everyone! Embarrasing! If it had to happen, why could it not have been with Sesshoumaru? I think I'm going to go to my comfortable recliner and have a good pout.
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome so far!!! I hope you keep the story up, cant wait to see what happens. Already waiting for the next post
thanks!!! bell
person missy71
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I just got done reading chapters 5&6 and they were great new additions to your story. I really love the way that Kagome and Shinji met. Keep up the great work.
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alsome Chapter! No fair, Kagome gets to have all the fun! I want my own demon 'pet'. *sighs* Please continue, I cant wait to find out what happens next!
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I sooooo love this story, it is so interesting, and the it keeps getting better and better, and that demon ball poem u wrote had me spinning and all the question marks popping into my mind, that could only mean trouble and drama...lol. I LOVE the character shinji, and sounds incredibly hotttt. if this wasn't a kag sess pairing, they would have made a great couple. And I can think the story is now starting, the drama and trouble haven't even begun to take hold yet. So please keep it coming and great work.
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
now that was an interesting revelation, concerning kagome, and I am eagerly awaiting further chapters, where we get to know more in the flashback.
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had to laugh, reading the latest chapter, it was so funny. kaome could do what she want, it didn`t matter, she was bound to end up doing something embarassing to the Daiyoukai´s there. Very neatthis chapter, though i find the idea interesting, that Kagome has some strange powers, that drive even Daiyoukai insane. It is going to be interesting how far Sesshoumaru is able to controll himself. Oh and stop teasing that poor Naoki, he really has no luck in this story
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it. TONS of sexual tension. I really like the taboo feeling with the 105 year old demon who looks like a young teenager. Yeah he's old enough...but is it right to be attracted to him? Hmmm...lol. Please let something dirrty happen between those two! And the dragon lord, too! ;p
person dkwolves
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh can't wait for the next chap! Can you please email me when you updated? Thanks. dkwolves@hotmail.com
person snowbird
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Argh!! Now I have to wait for the answer as to why Kagome is upsetting the beasts of so many demons, male that is. In other stories it would be because she was in heat. Her being Kagome and a miko, her heat, of course, is different from an ordinary ningen female.

So, from her past thoughts, she was at one time attracted to Sesshoumaru. Evidently the attraction was stronger than she originally thought since she's still strongly attracted to him. Love has to start somewhere.

I still have hopes you won't pair Sango and Miroku together. I get bored when they're paired together. It's more exciting and interesting when they're with someone else.