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for The Demon's Ball

by KPO4

schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Hot Stuff! Still a Naoki fan lol. Agressive Shinji is fanfuckingtastic btw.
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am in absolute LOVE with your story. I sincerely hope for an update soon considering how you ended your last chapter! Quite a cliffy. You've portrayed the characters in such a new, yet accurate way and the storyline is just amazing! I can't wait for what comes next!!
person kzb637
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Could you please let me know when you update? I would really LOVE to read more. I give the story two thumbs up and five stars. :) LOVE IT!!
person DarkFire
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Can't wait for an update. ;P
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMFG, that last part geeeeeezzzzzzz, that was hot and hot and sooo bad, i love your OC shinji. I repeat I LOVE THE BASTARD...smirks wickedly. Sigh, that was one heck of a cliffy, and I CANT wait to find out what lie sesshy is going to come up with to tell himself why he pulled away kags from his bro. But we all know he was INSANELY jealous, hell even i shocked stupid. BUT it was steamy and sooo good, i wouldn't mind if it was also a shinji/kags and a sesshou/kags pairings. There r soooo much possibilities. Oh and the storyline is getting really good with idea of the master. sigh update soon please.
person Lillian9
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hah. Serves Sesshoumaru right. If he doesn´t show interest in her himself someone else will. Why is he angry, I wonder? He has no right to be. If Sesshoumaru is that hostile towards Kagome he doesn´t deserve her the slightest bit. At least not yet. Maybe the incident with Shinji teaches him. I only hope that he won´t hurt her. She didn´t do anything wrong.
Please update soon!
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I really wanted to think of something intellegent to say in my review, so I put a lot of thought into it. So here is the only thing that was fittig to say....Uhh Ohh! Kagome is in sooooo much trouble! Lol! Great chapter, I loved it. Thanks for writing it. Ja!
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man!! You have to update!! Like really have to update... NOW!!! I wanna know what happens! Please!! I love the way that you wrote this out, it's good. I can't wait for the next update. like really I can't wait...
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
pleeeeeeease don't make me wait too long for an update!!! i wanna find out why sessho interfered in the first place, since he /obviously/ wasn't interested... and also i want to see how things play out between sessho and shinji. i realize that shinji didn't go in there with the intention of marking her but i want to know if sessho is going to pursue her as well. i want to know who she picks!!! hmmm... maybe she will get to sample both before she chooses. only time will tell, ne?
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it and i can wait untill you post more. if you keep writing ill keep reading!!