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i haven't seen the movie you stated but the fic is Awesome! so um is sesshoumaru going to be sleeping with two woman like in that movie?


Yashie~

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Well that was another good chapter, you really have me into this fic. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Nice! I love Kagome's temper! She'd react just like that. I can't wait till your next chapter. Ja ne =^_^=

i could just see it Kagome goes to say good by miroku goes to give her one last hug and hand shake and sesshomarus hair stands on end eyes go red yelling "NO TOUCHY!!" lol wow kinda reminds me of the episode of when miroku first came in but insted it was inu yasha yelling all the no touchys. Either way still great job keep it going i cheek every day for updates.

I LOVE IT!!! hahaha. The womb screams no more! You used it! Of course, you could have already had that in mind and I just jumped the gun with the suggestion. I had a big laugh over it. I wish I could have seen her face as she was thinking all those thoughts as the reality of it all came crashing into her mind. It's good that she wants to retain her independence but she still needs to take into consideration youkai mating rituals and laws. They both need to do some compromising. I have to be on his side, though, about the bite mark on the wrist. To me that was the same as a human male giving her an engagement ring. She needs to realize this. She should not have blown up at him. She needs to apologize to him. Since she's going to be the mate to a youkai, she needs to learn everything about their culture. That's just like in today's world, if you marry someone from a foreign country, it's best you learn all you can about their culture before you say "I do". It will save a lot of problems later.

I just finished reading some of the other reviews and I like the ideas that Legilmyth submitted. They sound exactly like something that I would enjoy reading. My sexual tension idea would fit perfectly with Legilmyth's suggestions. Hope you think about this.

Well these last two chapters that you just put up were great. You have done a great job with the spelling and the word usage. I hopw that you continue this story, can't wait for the next update:)

I'm still loving it even more. I think that one request of Kagome's is not going to work. I think once she's been with Sesshoumaru, lost her virginity and has a taste of him and some good hot sex, she's going to forget all about restricting them to breeding ruts. The sexual tension is going to be too strong between them to not give in. They'll feel it in their auras, when they smell each other, look at each other, accidentally touch each other. She will find it very hard and impossible to stick to that rule of hers. Of course for him, he's all for rutting whenever the urge hits sinse he finds himself strongly attracted to her. If you don't have him mark her during their first time together, then have him do it during one of their hot and heavy rutting sessions, but the marking will have to include him for the bond to be complete, especially if that is the way her lifespan is to be extended. Yes, I think sexual tension will be their downfall involving their emotions that includes trust and love. I hope this review will be of some help.

You are sooo ebillllllll leaving a cliff hanger like that *huffs* but that means when you up date it will be even better to read thanks for posting the story and the new chapter...update soon ok