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um i just wonder how she's going to carry all of them. 6 is a lot for a human. otherwise wonderful story!

ok i love the mating ceremony you defiantely put an interesting spin on it. It was original and i love it

You are an amazing writer
Bells

ohhhhhh, lol I cant wait for the next chapter, Hentai alerts, LEMON HEADS UNITE!!!. Lol but it was a interestingly tought out ceremony, and it was sweet of sesshoumaru to give rin her kimono, but how come the others have not had much say with kags, I mean as her friend I was surprised u kinda left them out. Well update soon and keep up the good work.

I was quite astonished that Kagome did not make a fuss about not starting a conversation with her friends, for usually she would have done, she did not talk at all and mingle with crowds speaking to them as she normally would have, which was unusual as well, otherwise the chapter was nice and the wedding was nice and simple which was also quite good. Though throughout the chapter I experienced a terrible sense of anti-climax as the spirit of a wedding did not really seem to reach out and let me touch it, which is very sad, because technically the wedding is ecellent, though there seems to be a fragment of soul missing, for it to be moving. I was happy fo Rin thouh, I`ve always had a soft spot for the little girl and I am glad she found happiness to last. Nonetheless I am looking forward to your next chapter.
P.S.: I never flame, always my honest opinion, even though that may hurt.

HURRAY FOR LEMONS!!! I can't wait for you to put that up. I bet Kagome would feel a bit nervous, but hell I know I'd enjoy it XD. JOY! I can't wait! *spinning around in circles*

I think Sesshoumaru was a complete ass to Kagome over the wedding kimono. Why was he making such a big deal over it? I thought Rin was precious to him and it was for her. He deserves to be in misery over his dreams. Too bad something doesn't happen to delay their mating just so he has to suffer some more. Also, I'm a little confused as to how their confrontation ended. Did it mean that Rin would get her kimono after all? Or did Kagome's comment mean that she was going to find a kimono maker on her own and that's what he agreed to? I still hope he gets payback for being an ass.

I'm glad she's learning more about the demon culture. I'm surprised Rin was no more help than that. There's always lots of unwritten rules in everything.

I like this story very much. However, I do need to say that you should try to re-read stuff before you post it and somebody else read it also for grammatical errors. They're not anything major, but I'm just a grammar nut like that. Besides that, I believe the story is fabulous so please continue! ^ _ ^

ok well i love this story and hope you update soon cause im dyin here

Bells

another great chappy...OMG Ice Prince gave himself um...relief...lmao. Anyway poor kags she seems so miserable and I am glad sango and miroku are around again. Cant wait for all the lemony goodness u promised...lol. Ad the idea of rin and kohakku together works immensely. Keep it up and update soon.

man, poor kagome , i think she`s really hit the low there,depressing chapter in part, though I hope that the wedding will cheer her up, especially as she will then gain a new family and be mother to Rin, which will cheer her up I hope, as she really cares for that girl. Oh and will Inuyasha be invited to the wedding, I mean he is Sesshoumaru´s half-brother after all, isn´t he`? So please update soon.