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Naw this was a great lemon scene i could visualise it as it took place and believe me it was well and truly worth the wait.

And as far as everyone else's stories on rin x sesshy goes don't put yourself down i believe you did and excellent job with the way you are writing them everyone has a unique way of writing certain pairing and your up their in my top 10 as a great writer of sessy x rin stories so don't ever post nothing negative about yourself have confidence in your writing just as i do, and all the other reviewers do.You did a great job^____~

I think I can understand Inuyasha`s unease, especially as nowhere was said anything about Sesshoumaru being invited to inuyasha`s wedding, and that he may feel guilty about it. Imnuyasha is probably also feeling uneasy because he has hot the best memories of the western palace. Otherwise a nice chapter showing what the others are doing. I had to smile though at the mentioning of the women going shopping. No matter the age..., any way nice chapter and I am looking forward to the next chapter and the wedding

i've been reading this story for awhile and i like how it's progressing so far and i look forward to your next post. rinx sesshomura 4 ever

The wedding announcement and preperations seemed a bit rushed to me, though otherwise nice chapters.Your lemon and the lime wene nicely written, so nothing to complain about there. Keep up the work and update soon, I hoe it gets under way soon, with some plot.

That was a beauty for a first time lemon writer i applaud you that was very hot erotic and sensual at it's best. And i look forward to more lemons in later chapters to come, great lemon i loved it and i think you did a beautiful job of bringing it about to the ultimate conclusion for rin and sesshomura. As only atrue believer in the pairring could^_____~

Wow your first time writing a lemon. I'm sure you'll do fine i've read alot of lime and lemon scenes and those writers have never written one before so i'll keep my fingers crossed for you.

I don`t know, it certainly is very romantic, though the chapter length makes it nearl impossible you get any info or plot in there. the story is well written, so give it a try, try to extend the length of your chapters