rate_review Reviews

That was very hot. Very good first Yaoi fic. I always have read and written mainly InuCest, but I'm starting to like to read Inu/Miroku too lately. I'm glad you made them switch positions too, that was perfect! I was a little disappointed at first when Inu was seme, because I LOVE uke Inu (that's probably because I always read Sesshy/Inu), but when you switched them that made it even better than if it had been just seme Miroku and uke Inu. I notice you write mainly Kags/Inu which no offense, is my least favorite pairing (I hate Kagome), just my opinion though and I'm not a fan of het, I read and write only Yaoi, but if you write some more Yaoi I'd love to reaad it.

It was okay, not the best I've ever read. A little more description would've been nice, maybe researching more on male/male sex would help some? Or even going a bit more in-depth with the whole one-shot would've made this shorty(lol) just that much more enjoyable. But besides that good job, and good luck on your other works. ^-^

not bad actually ,as usual I`ll be bitching arpund saying that this story has potential for a series (I really mean it though) yet still a nice good oneshot with nicely described sex. clear and easy to read, look forward to seeing more