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for Welcome to the Dollhouse

by angelofdeath5022

schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Its called a splint.(Cast holder thingy...Wtf?)
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
.......Um, well its different. I do like the idea though but all of the characters seem a little OCC. Okay, okay a lot OCC. But its a wonderful idea. You also had several typos and a few sentences that didn't make sence. I do think it would have been better without the talking poo thing. But it was funny and I'm not complaining. It is a good story so far and I am going to keep reading. I really want to see where this is headed.
person MPlantz
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG LMFAO you got the Bed, Bath and Beyond idea from Adam Sandler in Click didn't you? When the gang wnt down that isle that is what I imediately thought of. Damn if you did'nt get the idea from there what irony is that. LOL

This is too god to be true keep going my friend i love it.
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far write more soon .
^Dei
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow Sango was about to get pissed on by Kagome.That would have been sad.
Lol,to that line what Inuyasha said."If I wanted to see shit talk then I would have talked to Shippo."
Write more soon.
^Dei Dei
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far it sounds like its going to be a wonderful story. I can't wait to read the rest of it.

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