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by doggieearlover

schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is certainly starting to heat up. I wonder what Kikyou did to him. And the wolf pack, hmm, I wonder when Inu Yasha will go full out against Kouga? And when will you introduce Sesshoumaru?mOh my god there`s so much to look forward that I can`t wait for you to update the story with new chapters.
person zianeu
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting AU. I'm liking how you envisioned the characters. They are quite true to their origins in the manga, but different.

I look forward to more.
person zianeu
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, another chapter, and the plot thickens. Too much to hope she died in a horrid accident, eh?

Miroku's rather less redeemable in this fic, isn't he? I'm really enjoying the story all the same. Checked out some of your other stuff, too. Quality, quality story and quality smut, LOL. Keep up the good work, please!
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
welll, the setting of the story into modern age japan is certainly an interesting idea, and the story in itself is starting to heat up. As of now it seems unclear whether you want to imlement a plot into the story or not, so I cannot say anything about that, your writing style is nice and easy to read andyou portray Miroku so far quite well. . This story certainly deserves further chapters ASAP