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Wham! What an explosion, now that was a chapter. Extremely action packed, and also some very nice developments.Though I laughed really hard when Kagome had to answer these female ookami youkai,it sees that girls will be girls no matter what species they are, hn? I am a bit concerned about Inuyasha and his demon blood though, I mean he apparently knows that his Tessaiga is important to him in some way, so I hope he`ll soon notice what Tessaiga is there for. I am a bit disappointed in Miroku, letting himself be overpowered by Kouga just like that. I may be a bit of a fool, though I get the feeling that Kagome`s mother is slowly but surely trying to coax Kagome into living with Inuyasha. It also seems as though Kouga is the main antagonist as can be seen so far. You also portray a side of him that is far more vicious in a way than in the manga, then as I caught it, he openly speaks of kidnapping her and raping her in order to hurt Inuyasha. Ginta and Hakakku though were something of a joke, loyal to the core to Kougaa, with obvious contempt for human yet blundering about and messing things up, what a joke. Nice one there, while reading I couldn`t help but rolly my eyes at them.
P.S.: Just a question, but will we also see something of Sesshoumaru with Rin, I just like that pair it always make me chuckle?

....Wow, what a chapter. So many things came to the forfront all at the same time. I really do like this chapter too. It seams to have kicked things up a notch and is more than likely the turning point in the story. This chapter was wonderful for strengtening the characters and plot. I just cant wait till the next chapter, but I need sleep and will read it from here when you post it. Anyway this chapter was wonderfully written and had no typos or any mistake dthat I could see at all. I hope the rest of the story is as good as this chapter or better. With your writting it probably is. And as always, keep up the great work.

p.s.
I love how you used that kiss to calm down our favorite hanyou.

oy that`s not fair, posting tweo chapters at one, how am I supposed to review each then? Ok jokes byside.First of all I really have to congratulate on the way you depict Kaome`s mother. Although that woman only wants her daughter to be happy,I think she certainly has a wicked streak 8AS IN ROGUEISH; THE TEASING:::9 i ALSO LIKED THE SCENE IN WHICH mIROKU FINALLY REALIZED THAT READING AN ARTICLE THAT HAS COME UP IN THE SEARCH MIGHT PROVIDE HIM WITH INFORMATION; VERY FUNNY THAT ONE WASyOU HAVE ALSO BEGun to broaden the world it is set in(sorry for all the capital letters, mistake of mine, though I`m too lazy just now to correct this mistake) by not only introducing Kouga`s doja, but I also think, that this was the first scene in your entire story so far, which featured neither of one of the 4 main story characters, It`s finally growing, yay! I found it very interesting that until now, Inuyasha has displayed only a few youkai traits in behaviour, though now that he has has sex with Kagome his youkai blood seems to be much more active making him act also more of a youkai,which is also an indicator of who muh he loves Kagome as I think. Otherwise nicely written as always and even better was the language you used. High-class. Reading a story written in such high-class enlish reminds me why I love that language.

Woow, i love where the story is going,
and thanks for adding soo much chapters already ! :)
i read them all, cant wait for 18,

Heyy, OMG ! i love where the story is going.
and i love how in chapter 11 you had the slight coupling with InuYasha and Kagome.
It was genius.
And your FanFics, are soo great.
You are a great Author and should write more :)
i woudl read them all .

I love the humor in this story. As always it is a wonderful story and well written also. I am currently reading this on both sites but leaving most of my reviews here. I just coulsn't wait to read the citrus and see what Kagome had planned. I can't wait until its posted here. Anyway just wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying it. I like to read a serious story evey once and a while. Keep up the good work.

I remember how you said that Youkai and Hanyou lived in the middle of the humans, yet now you display the ookami youkai as being pretty archaic and somewhat animalistic. Although I understand that this`d be the way the< were raised, doesn`t it somewhat clash with the rules of the society the live in, and makes their existence far more obvious? I also do not understand something else. You mentioned Youkai living in the woods behind the dojo, with Inuyasha`s permission obviously seeing as it is hisproperty, though on the other hand you said that Inuyasha is not accepted by Youkai, so how does this fit?. I know that this may be seen as nit picking, yet these points seems to clash with some of the main story pillars. On the other hand I think I can now begin to understand the way you write you stories, and I must say to be able to insert something in a chapter an then let this particular object resurface tenn chapters later means that,there is very little room for spontaneous insertion in the story, but also means that you practically sketch out the whole story with many details before starting to write making you practically a professional author, which really shows and does wonders for your story.

Those were some harsh words you had for me, I do feel a bit misunderstood. Nonetheless the story.Well..., the first lemon scene in this story and a very nice one as it is. The description had a nice balance between aggression (Kagome initiating many moves)and slowing down the pace (the tenderness an love from htese two), and I must confess I felt a smile when you wrote that Kagome actually wore the outfit she had been iven prior, even thouh it had shocke before, nice twist that one. It was also interesting that Kagome as soon as she ws an instructor could not wait to give herself aa birthday present and Inuyasha a very nice memory.. Other than thatnothing much seemed to happen, making it a rather relaxing sort of chapter, though I found the idea of Sango glaring at potential leechers on the train hilairious, now that was a nice comical point of relief in the style of the manga, too bad she didn`t have Hiraikotsu with her;)
P.S.: I never assumed the man taking care of Kirara was a youkai

Yay, its the birthday chapter. Oooh lemon. Anyway I really enjoyed this chapter since we finally got to see what Kagome had planned. It was very well written as always. Also I loved how you also mentioned the problem with the groping on the trains. Not many americans know about that spacific problem. I'm glad that Sango scared all the would be gropers away. I don't know about you but that would definately ruin my birthday celebration. Oh and we got to see how understanding Kagome's Mom is yet again. She really reminds me of how my mom was.

Yay, that was so sweet. I definately loved the part about her wishing for him on her birthdays. This chapter was very well written as usual. Also Imay just slow down my reading and continue on this site rather than mm.Even though I am on chapter 15 there. Anyway love the story and as always keep up the good work.