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It really is funny that Inuyasha of all people gives Mroku advice on the subject of love.Fickle little thing isn`t it love?. Yet still there is this issue about Sango`s dreams. I thinkk Sango`s dreams about what has happened are there because she has found new friends, paradoxially. On the other hand it`s quite logical seeing as Sango is practically living together with Inuyasha, Miroku and kagome and the four of them have made something that resembles a family in a way, and thus Sango has acquired a new family, meaning that the memories of her old one will return as her emotional eally havve been torn down. I mean she sees kagome as a sister, has fallen in love with Miroku and Inuyasha has taken her with him as he presented Kagome tohis family,making her a very close friend indeed. Otherwise keep up the good work will ya? Oh, and in the last chapters I noticed that you jumped into the lemon scenes without preparation,it makes it a bit harder to read as there is absolutely no warning of an impending lemon scene and one cannot prepare, it is a though you were on peaceful meadow and the next second in the midst of a hot sex scene, biig difference. Will you keep that sort of style up, or will you revert to your old style?
P.S.: Please don`t kill me for asking ok?

Well kaome said she wanted a quickie didn`t she? ;) I wonder how much Sango and Kagome will remember the next day. I zhought Sango was able to remember her brother, so hwo come she now cannot remember him or doesn`t she want to divulge the information just now. I didn`t properly get that, She will get a big shock when Miroku reveals to her what he knows. ouch! What I find interesting is the relationship with which Inuyasha sees Miroku and Sango with him. Although Miroku is his best friend, Inuyasha also cares a lot for Sango , and while this is not unusual, yet he is also strangely possesive of sango, though not nearly as much as of Kagome, though that is to be understood. I rather think Inuyasha unconciously sees the 4 of them as some sort of pack, maybe a dog instinct from his side.(I hope I am not overexerting myself again with this)This would explain many small hints of yours.I won`t sprcify now those. Interesting though is the fact that Miroku called Sango his girl, thereb voicing it for the first time that he wants a deep, intimate relationshi with this girl and how she reacted the way before I don`t think she`ll mind. Though you will be telling me of now how their realtionship is still far away from being complete and that I will have to wait, nut please a man can dream can`t he?

sorry for the lack of review of the previous chapter, so I`ll do both at the same time. You expended a lot of energy on the description of the situation with the translator, so I wonder what role he will continue to play in the stroy and what his motif was. The main story though with the man who harassed Sango was used in a perfect way to further Miroku`s and Sango`s relationship. Definetly set the setting for an upcoming lemon scene between them, as what miroku said at the end of the chapter was as good as a declaration of love. While in the previous chapter I had the feeling of severe hypocrisy coming from the youkai there, what the translator said convinced me. I mean even with sesshoumaru standing beside his brother and encouraging him and sccepting him the youkai are very disdainfully, really showing how crusted the traditions are and how much prejudice lives in the world. Gah, depressing isn`t it?

great story looking forward to your next chapter

Kagome`s grandfather sure can be grumpy can`t he. What I foun was really interestin, that in the first chpters a nearly frugal lifestyle of Inuyasha`s was established and now we see him casually going to a jeweller and buying diamond andplatinum rings, plus his habit of importing clothing. It shows Inuyasha in a completely different light. I also liked the situation with miroku starting to lose all colour, just think a woman even hornier and more lecherous than the monk;) The way Miroku is turning out is quite nice, though the funny thing is that both seem to know who they want, yet both are too scared to admit it. Should have some nice and funny consequences. I`m looking forward, when Inuyasha and Kagome are to be presented to The Nishimori family and how Jisab will react to seein a full Taiyoukai

Where do you get the recipe for their meal it sounds delicious. I was quite able to picture all four of them in their going-out stuff, andd I must agree with miroku if your avid description has provided the proper pictures to my befuddled mind.( too much work ad sitting in front of the computer reading and writing) I actually was a bit surprised that amidst all of your great Inuyasha/Kagome liaison, there sudenly appeared a lemon scene featuring Sango, though that really clinches it. I just hope that woman gets her act together as soon as possible and confesses her feeling for Miroku to him. Just a question did Sesshoumaru show himself as a taiyoukai to Kagome`s family?

Yay, at long last Rin enters the scene. I must confess that I have something for that little girl, she is just so heart-warming. The funny thing though in this chapter was Sesshoumaru being a nice guy( well relatively seen) with the taking up of the wardage of Rin , and then he`s an absolute bastard telling Kagome about her engagement to inuyasha, when he hasn`t even proposed to her. Either he just assumed he already had, due to the fact they are lovers,or he just wanted to be a bit of a bastard, full well knowing that he`d enrage his brother. I like to see Miroku`s and Sango`s relationship seems to be gathering up speed. I also just adore those talk Sango has with Krara, very nice. I have one complaint though. Sesshoumaru mentioned he wanted to speak to both Inuyasha and Kaome in private, though he only spoke to Inuyasha, thereby omitting Kagome, if I`m not mistaken. I know you cannot change the story, as it has already been written far, far ahead (though I haven`t peeked I promise. I rely an you posting one chapter after another here on aff)yet still I wonder what happened there . Ok see you next chapter

Whoa, what an entrance by Sesshoumaru. You certainly were not kidding when you said he`d enter the sscene soon.I am not sure, but I think that Inuyasha and Kouga are both Representatives of different way of live, with Koua the more archaic, primal way, pure youkai if you so want and Inuyasha a more sophisticated way of life 8the civilized human way? Wait something`s wrong there humans are not civilized, ah the civilize hanyou way of life) Finally Inuyasha get`s to know about his demon blood, though I stll find it funny, that Kagome can bring his blood to boil and calm his blood, very useful isn`t she. (Sorry, somehow I`m just too sarcastic today) You elevated Sesshoumaru in Status did you not in comparison to the manga, as he is now the Taiyoukai of the whole of Japan and not only the western lands. He also seemed to have a sense of humor. Wait Sesshoumaru and humor,paradoxon.Otherwise the chapter was very informative, as it also brought a few more information on Inuyasha`s family, not to mention the entrace of Myouga and Totousai. I liked the idea though that Myouga would wait until the casette recorder had been invented, so he could sed Sesshoumaru a message, without the fear of being killed.

Sorry I've been too rushed lately to be anything more than a passive reader. That doesn't mean I haven't been loving the story in my spare time. This is quickly becoming one of my favorite AUs. I like how you've worked the Wolf-clans into the story, although I still wonder how demons work with the rest of society in general... Of course the X-men get on pretty well with arguably 'superior' beings being run into hiding, so it could be somewhat similar here with the 'superior' yet less populous demon stock just trying to fade in and using their advantages where they could on the sly, more or less.

I am already very sad, as the scanlations for the last chapter Inuyasha have come out, after more than 10 years, Inuyasha has finally finished. Sob. On to your story though. Kagome`s family do favour a direct approach in getting things done. I´m surprised at how much Souta actually saw and understood. I couldn`t help but laugh over Miroku, I mean he had tried so hard and then this, poor guy he really seems to be a bit cursed ;). Oh and Inuyasha seems to be rather traditional doesn`t he, meaning that he will have to present Kagome to Sesshoumaru, and if he`s anything like the Sesshoumaru we know and like, this could be quite violent. Surporisingly short review for a long chapter, though as the title suggest not much new (except the groping and Inuyasha`s intentions to oneday marry Kagome)