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I love this story. I really hope you update it soon! ^_^x

so yeah. I love this story. Its on my favorite list. I adore Miroku and Sango and I think you have done an excellent job with how their relationship is. Cant wait to see how it progresses!

I just can't wait to read what's next... I love your work and I look forward to every update e mail that I get from you.. Please... more.... Thanks for the great stories.. I enjoy all of your work...

This was a gooooood chapter :P.
you write really well and have very good plots for your stories. Especially in dealing with personalities and people. Like Mirokuo and Sango, you portrayed their relationship very nicely and it seemed very realistic. The same with InuYasha/Kagome and even Sesshomaru and Kagura. I cant wait to see what happens with their relationship since as it is totally new and seems very interesting. :).

Hope you can update soon.

A red colour hmm? Seems as though Naraku may already have some demonic powers already acquired.I wonder if Myouga got a taste of his blood, for that may be interesting. This chapter was a huge step forward plot-wise and well worth the long wait. I`m also getting the impression as though there is going to be a huge exposion in one way or anotherin the next chapters. What is also interesting is the fact that Kikyou has now been turned into a full villain and accomplice of Naraku, seeing as she provided him with information about Kagome (before she was only a lover or so). >ou have also managed to implement two different speeds into your story seeing as the "goodies" are taking it slow, in every respect-especially in the departement of relationships-, the "baddies" are driving their plans forward at the utmost speed they have. Very impressive that is, as one had to ckeep complete control of the situation. Oh and I think that was probably the longest monologue Sesshoumaru has ever spoken, seeing as he normally is notoriously short. Nice change. Please continue this story soon.

YAYY AN UPDATEE ! : )
i love this chapter, lol. And kagura, crazy bitch. i frickin love her. lmao.
shes an awesome character in this sory, and great writing as always.
Cant wait for your next update.

UPDATE SOON PLEASE !

Yay, at long last a new chapter, and what a chapter! When I read about Sesshoumaru´s mom, wow I was laughing out so loud, very nice touch that. Though of course she seemed a bit weak if Kagura was able to defeat her so easily. Nonetheless I am happy that Sesshoumaru has finally found someone who is whorthy of him, and who makes him happy. It was alyo a very ingenious way of setting Sesshoumaru on Naraku´s tail. Myouga though was quite a bit OOC, I mean voluntarily going into potentially hostile territory, helloo? Otherwise he popped up at the right time knowing quite a lot as usual. I am quite interested in whether you will give Inuyasha the attacks of his Tetsuaiga, seeing as he couldn´t have gained them as in the mana, and seeing as he may need them in the upcoming battle, I am interested in that issue. Your alternating, yet still interwinded style of telling a story presents many oppurtunities for realtively funny situation, as this chapter onece again showed (the telephone conversation featuring Kagome, Sango, Kirara and Myouga). I am also curious as to what fate you have planned for Kikyou, so please continue and update !!!

^_^ That chapter was wonderful. I loved the conversation about Kagura and Sesshy's mom. I laughed the whole way through it. Especially when you mentioned that Sesshy was trying not to laugh. Anyway this chapter was well written as usually and I cant wait for the next chapter.

I just love this story! The plot goes at a steady pace and Everything fits together. I \can't wait to see how Miroku and Sango's relatinship progresses. Ohh, and I wonder what was discovered about Naraku. Keep up the fantastical Writting style, Story plot, plot progression, and love developement.

XOXO, I love Naruhina


ps. Do I smell love blooming between Kagura and seshomaru?

pss. I'm sorry if I spelled anything wrong.

o_O Well that chapter was definately interesting. I'm not really into yaoi though. I liked the rest though. I just can't wait to see where this is headed. Keep up the great work.