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for CLAIMING KIN by Salome and Talon

by salomewilde

person Imanewme
schedule March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is unique. It's not just about the sex. It's about the dominance and the responsibility of being in charge. It was a little surprising that Sesshoumaru lost himself over Kin's urine, particularly when he has a history of having bodily fluids in his mouth. He muses that Tai's knot may have contributed to his reaction, and I'm looking forward to see how that plays out. How all has Tai's knot changed him, I wonder. It's not hard to draw parallels between the Tai X Sesshoumaru pairing and the Sesshoumaru X Kin pairing. (Like father, like son?) Thank you ladies for another provocative chapter. Caio!
person Anon
schedule March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aw, pee play :) it's fun to see an exploration of the more animal side of their demon-hoods. and Sesshy's so sweet with Inu, it's like fluffy! or, rather, pee soaked fluff.
person natasha
schedule March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
really great chappie 2 for 1 and they were wonderful just wonderful can't wait for more to come.
person kira
schedule March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, Sensei, Miss Talon! The part in the bath where everyone had a bit of fun was a delight to read! I can't wait to see what happenes to the girls in the morning. XD *looking forward to the next chappie*
schedule March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very awesome, I loved the two scenes playing out at the same time, very intriguing and sexy! I can't wait to read more of this you two, wonderful work yet again!
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Kin is way too cute for his own good.
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Also Kin would not want to make Onii's belly feel yucky.

Mmmm...so not eating Kin but licking Kin is a good com...comp...comr...thingie!!
person natasha
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow great chap it has been a long time since last time you put up a chap but this was just wonderfully put together just loved it so much . i really hope next time won't be so long for the next one to come.
schedule January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
now this was a surprising chapter...and good. And Sesshoumaru...growing up? Was worth the waiting for.
person chinadoll1980
schedule December 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this fic is very good i have lost a lot of sleep trying to read this fic it is that good i am looking forwered to it getting finished and how thing will turn out with hana and kouga