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aww Kin =3

"I didn't get to say goodbye..."

Dawwwwww... that is so darn cute! There's an overall sweetness about the two puppies playing together. I'm elated that little Teru has something good to remember; it seems as if he had forgotten what good things were like.

OMG PLEASE have Sessh buy that pup!!! RIGHT NOW!!! Please don't wait til they're older....make it so that they buy him off his master right then and he doesn't have to leave with him....you did say in the chapter previous that you wanted to get Kin a slave, he may not be female but I think we and Kin like this better. Oh and the things they can do together mmmmmm. Kin can show and introduce Teru to Kini and they all can 'drink'. OMG so much potential!!! I'm so glad you guys are back from your hiatus.

This was great! One thing that I would like to see in future is the training of kin.....in all body fluids to only release them when Sessho says he can. I also hope that Kin's "favorite sister" gets the role if Kin's girl pet!

"Onii? Can there be one more gift today?"

"Have you one in mind, my pet?" he asks, stroking Kin's soft, untangled hair with devoted claws.

"Yes," he says as he leans into Onii's stroking pets. "Onii's fuck, please?"


O.o It doesn't get any better than that ladies. Well done as always ^_^

~Onyx aka Lynx

I am so happy to see you both are adding to this.

You both always make me smile.

I didn't know that y'all had updated! :pouts: I hide out for a few :cough: weeks :cough: and I miss out of my sweet Kin - twice!

Anyway. While this chapter had urine play (something that I'm not particularly interested in except as a form of power play) in it, it also had something that jumped out at me far more than the little 'kink.' It was the degree in which Sesshoumaru completely and totally relies on the young Inuyasha. When he felt like a beta, he thought about Kin to help him regain his dominant status. When he felt the need for sexual stimulation, he thought of Kin to relieve the need. When he thought about trust issues, he thought about Kin's ultimate trust. When his 'demon self' wanted fear, he used Kin (much to his shigrin). And when Kin showed terror, Sess thought about about Kin's safety and soothing almost over his own allergic reaction. The relationship is symbiotic and this chapter really has shown it. I liked it lots.

This chapter was funny. I loved Mizao's discomfort and shock at the relationship between the two brothers. I wonder if this is just an inu thing? One thing I will say, though, is that the constant switching around was a little confusing. Not so much confusing as it sometimes broke the flow a little bit much. Perhaps grouping the Sess/Kin sections a little more and the Yumi/Mizao sections together a little more. Otherwise it's kinda like reading a very very interesting tennis match and you try not to get whiplash. :)

I also like the Rin forshadowing. I'm looking forward to reading more. I'm greedy, aren't I?

That last anon review was mine - Caitriona no baka!

....*blushes horribly*

XD