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thanks for updating! ^^,

i've been waiting for this story to update

I already miss Kin and his Onii, oh what will happen now to Rin?

please update soon

Review for the Teru chapter:
It was a wonderful but sad chapter.
You almost had me thinking that Sess would not join in.
It had many memorable lines.
"Loyal, intelligent, skilled, strong, handsome, sexual, and submissive. He dismisses the futile wish. Such a perfect creature could not possibly exist." > It could be just me but those lines seem to reek of foreshadowing.

He's not gonna love Inuyasha at all is he

Yea! Rin makes an appearance. There are so many things that Kin can 'explain' to her and do with her that will be just luscious. The description of the slave grounds is interesting. I wonder how Kin's reaction to the place with ultimately change it.

I love the superbly intense relationships between Sesshomaru and Tai, and Sesshomaru and Kin. As I read each new chapter as it is posted, I also find myself constantly wondering how Sesshomaru will relate to Kin when the child is older. Will they interact somewhat like Tai and Sesshomaru, always loving each other but with fierce struggles for independence (although to a lesser degree, as you have made it clear that Kin is not an alpha)? Kin can't be the same submissive, utterly adoring little puppy that he is now for the rest of his life. How will Sesshomaru connect with an adult Kin? If Sesshomaru takes a female mate for the sake of having pups, will Kin be neglected? I also wonder if Tai will at any point come to appreciate the beauty and charm of his hanyou son, and if he does, will Sesshomaru be jealous? Oh dear, I see that I've just typed a whole bunch of questions - no, I don't expect answers to them, but it's all just a way of saying that your story makes me think deeply about love and power and changes in relationships, and that it moves me enough to wonder about the characters' futures!

I am so glad everyone had such a good time, and that eventually things will turn out OK for little Teru!

Some comments on Piss Play parts I&II (I haven't read Teru yet)

I'm winging it because I lost my notes on what I was going to say. Part I: I ended up rereading part of it because I sped through it the first time and got confused (my problem not your guys' writing) but afterwards I had the song "my favorite things" stuck in my head for hours. Interpret that as you will. Part II: I really liked how it went back and forth between the bathing servants and the goings on in the tub. That seemed to give it an extra element of anticipation, or something that made it that much better.

I think I love little Teru. Poor Pup. In a way, what Kin did was cruel - to see the love and fuck that he shares with Onii-sama. But he was also kind - he shared. Teru is like the broken version of what Kin would have been had Onii not saved him from the bull (and the bull allowed him to live), and I just want to hug him up.

I also liked the foreshadowing when Sesshoumaru wished for a single servant who could do it all. After all, isn't that what Kin will become?

Thanks so for sharing

Whew what a chapter! I don't know how you two do it, but you manage incorporate innocence into something that isn't necessarily, well, innocent! Such a wonderful job and it makes for a very good read.

Great work ladies!!!

really great chappy poor inu didn't get to sat good-bye but still he can still remember the good time they had.